Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, crimes increased with changing time. such as argued that all people should punished with decided fixture who felt in same crime. Whilst other disagree. This essay agrees that a same judgement for such type of crimes. This essay discuss both points of views.
First and foremost, It is clear that crime will increase if It will neglect. Criminal should be punished same prices so that all folk will thought first before do something which is illegal. It is therefore agreed that fixed penalty can reduce crime rate as well as illegal work. For instance, normal man was attempted a murder to someone who should punished likewise criminal judge.
However, many disagree and feel that some factors should consider before penance someone. Like motivation for crime. This People harmless for society. That people have not total fault in misdeed because of they were misguided by other. Despite this, If someone who attracted toward motivation speech for crime that people danger in future for society so that factors cannot be consider for punishment for same crimes. For example, teenager was raped girl then teenager should be treat as other older people. So that in future, all teenager have an example of punishment for do something criminal activities.
Most important thing is how to decrease a crime level in all ages. This problem is solve by fixed punishment, but some still feel that it is not correct way. To pen down, i would like to tell you that fixed punishment could reduced level of crime in all ages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Such
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
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Suggestion: These
...nce someone. Like motivation for crime. This People harmless for society. That peopl...
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Suggestion: because they
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Message: Did you mean 'treated'?
Suggestion: treated
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Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: solved
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Suggestion: reduce
...to tell you that fixed punishment could reduced level of crime in all ages.
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...uld reduced level of crime in all ages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'likewise', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252631578947 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.161403508772 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0912280701754 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0631578947368 0.0501214627716 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0210526315789 0.0437548338989 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.164912280702 0.122226691241 135% => OK
Participles: 0.0245614035088 0.0403226058552 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.29214010261 2.80594681477 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0140350877193 0.0326793684256 43% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00350877192982 0.00163938923432 214% => OK
Determiners: 0.0561403508772 0.0861772015684 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0421052631579 0.021408717616 197% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0210526315789 0.011925033212 177% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1533.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98828125 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37890625 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2578125 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16796875 0.203846283523 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.078125 0.137316102897 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29214010261 2.80594681477 82% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57421875 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.1576079541 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.4736842105 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2771724504 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6842105263 127.492653851 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4736842105 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.99599198397 300% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.2549342105 49.1944974215 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.8 1.69124875643 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335666352896 0.332605444948 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0959082524942 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0795216590751 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.459832453585 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138725208606 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11067508441 0.134430193775 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614771286507 0.0742795772207 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.171229412179 0.324371583561 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0301036346564 0.0638462369009 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20102155298 0.228012699653 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723026143333 0.058150111329 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.5751503006 427% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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