Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
The modern society is the place of making a decision. The fundament of the current society is shaped based upon the each individual's decision. While some people are convincing that the nowadays the children make their own choices independently from their parents; others, on the other hand, believe otherwise. I absolutely agree with the first belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first reason which advocates my outlook is that today's family structure and its relationship differ from the past family's interaction. Indeed, in the modern society, each member of household considers as equal and vital as other members. There is no matter how old is she or what she is capable of. All of them with any responsibility and ability are treated identically. As a result, each person in a family is accountable for her own decision. This situation applies to the children too. Even a six years old boy is responsible for his choices, and he is able to make a decision about the fields such as his clothing or his school. A vivid example can be given to shed light on the issue is my nephew's instance. He is five years old and single kid of family. He is capable of making a decision about what to wear, which kindergarten to go. In none of these spots, his parents do not attempt to influence his idea; moreover, he freely makes his choices.
The second factor which gives adherence to my idea is that the adult children are more independent in comparison to the past children. It is lucidly explicit that the majority of the youths after the age of 18 experience the sense of the independency. This independence can be defined in the various ways. One of these definitions is the financial independence. According to the noteworthy, intelligent survey conducted in my country, approximately sixty-five percent of the youths, above the age of 20, in the Tehran have the monetary independence; therefore, they live separate from their parents and tackle their daily duties lonely. In this situation, if they face a dilemma or difficulty, they will address that situation based on own thought and not their parents' belief.
Nonetheless, some people may assume that the kids are relayed on their relatives in any condition, and due to their needs, they ask for the help from their parents. Conversely, they overlook this subtle point that calling for the advice varies from the making the decision. It is an undeniable fact, the people require advice from the wiser and elder people to guarantee the outcome, but it does not mean that those people make the ultimate decision. In the modern life, the children can seek the advice from their parents to opt the best, ultimate option; however, they do not depend on them for making a decision.
To wrap it up, based on the aforementioned reasons, one can logically draw the conclusion that the current young people do not depend on their parents for making a decision since the family structure alters fundamentally from the past period. Also, the children experience independence from their youth age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ason which advocates my outlook is that todays family structure and its relationship d...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227655986509 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.131534569983 0.158761421928 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0843170320405 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.043844856661 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0741989881956 0.0685040099705 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116357504216 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0286677908938 0.0351676179071 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76080151175 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0236087689713 0.0309702414327 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00168634064081 0.00188951952338 89% => OK
Determiners: 0.134907251265 0.0887237588012 152% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0118043844857 0.0209618222197 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134907251265 0.0139019557991 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3154.0 2387.08602151 132% => OK
No of words: 532.0 408.028673835 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92857142857 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342105263158 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257518796992 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174812030075 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122180451128 0.112833075102 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76080151175 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501879699248 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 60.2299634575 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8726169783 48.84282405 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.607142857143 0.644075263715 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 44.7518796992 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.49324324324 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366884999787 0.300154397459 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110310854106 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0957243039453 0.0752933317313 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.509973903413 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179889331776 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130233378804 0.114077575197 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791900423121 0.0781384742642 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.468579203438 0.336927656856 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105363178653 0.067059652881 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267049364089 0.210909579961 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525816656098 0.0618886996521 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.91756272401 285% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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