Question:People who wear eyeglasses often need stronger prescriptions over time. For example, a woman in her 40s began wearing glasses on the advice of an optometrist and, in just one year, required stronger lenses. Furthermore, eyeglass and contact lens users report more eye-related problems than do those who wear neither. Given that a typical eyeglass wearer buys expensive new glasses every two to three years, people considering corrective lenses should instead invest in an eye-strengthening program, which could save them thousands of dollars over their lifetimes."
The argument on a whole describes that 'the measure of wearing eyeglasses and corrective lenses is in a way increasing the problem of faulty eyesight'.The evidences that the author uses like 'people with eyeglass have more eye problems' and 'people who are prescribed glasses eventually have to go for stronger prescriptions' have a person with eye problem as the subject and lack to discuss about the normal healthy people.Also, the solution that the argument refers is absurd and holds no significant importance to people who already have weak eye-sights.
Firstly,the evidence that people 'who wear eyeglasses often need stronger prescriptions' uses a 40 year old lady as the subject and tries to show her experience as a general one.As we grow old , eyesight becomes weak so we cannot hold the reasoning that the old lady needed a stronger prescription just because she started using glasses.It could be because her eyesight became more weak.We cannot generalize the way it is done.
Similarly to the above evidence the author again in the argument 'eyeglass and contact lens user reports more eye related problems' takes an eye-patent as the subject.Obviously if one is an eye patient he would be needing more assistance from the optometrist than a normal person. Reporting more eye related problems is just because of the fact they have once been diagnosed of suffering from eye problem ,hence further side effects might follow but it is no where related to their use of corrective measures like the eye glasses and contact lenses.
This argument also fails to answer some major questions about the measure that it is suggesting 'the eye strengthening program'.Is this program for people with normal eye or for people with bad eyesight? This is important because as far as the nature of such programs is they just increase the attentive ability of the eye or the concentration of the eye and not the eyesight.So it will be a waste for the people who have already invested so much in buying new glasses and lenses.
The argument tries to convince that people should not go for corrective measures such as eyeglasses and lenses if they have a bad eyesight.It fails to understand the need of them.Once a patient is diagnosed with a bad eyesight, he is left with the only options in order to live his life normally.Its not a choice but a requirement.Also, the argument fails to differentiate between eye patients and normal people.He should have provided better evidence in order to support his claims.Hence with a little more clarity with the subject of the evidence and the fact of knowing that wearing glasses is not a choice.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271334792123 0.25644967241 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.161925601751 0.15541462614 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.089715536105 0.0836205057962 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0568927789934 0.0520304965353 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0371991247265 0.0272364105082 137% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.129102844639 0.125424944231 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0481400437637 0.0416121511921 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85036628324 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0262582056893 0.026700313972 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.129102844639 0.113004496875 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.019693654267 0.0255425247493 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0109409190372 0.0127820249294 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2628.0 2731.13054187 96% => OK
No of words: 442.0 446.07635468 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94570135747 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.57801047555 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368778280543 0.378187486979 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289592760181 0.287650121315 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180995475113 0.208842608468 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115384615385 0.135150697306 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85036628324 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 207.018472906 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454751131222 0.469332199767 97% => OK
Word variations: 50.0699848775 52.1807786196 96% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.039408867 35% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 63.1428571429 23.2022227129 272% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 146.421532932 57.7814097925 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 375.428571429 141.986410481 264% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.1428571429 23.2022227129 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 0.724660767414 197% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 3.58251231527 642% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 92.102133161 51.9672348444 177% => OK
Elegance: 1.75213675214 1.8405768891 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287600572305 0.441005458295 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.231156295526 0.135418324435 171% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0761084359031 0.0829849096947 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.874690413306 0.58762219726 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116771933319 0.147661913831 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170838628261 0.193483328276 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568148072501 0.0970749176394 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.38419326408 0.42659136922 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109813830516 0.0774707102158 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197553910558 0.312017818177 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305344926577 0.0698173142475 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.33743842365 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 6.46551724138 31% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 14.657635468 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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