Leaders like John F Kennedy and Luther King has high contribution to the people of the united states. Name any one world leader who you think has contributed to the people. Give specific reasons behind your choice.
The people are directly influenced by their leader. Leader represents them, sometimes the image of the particular nation or group is characterisized by it's leader. Just like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King, DR A.P.J. Abdul Kalam has also made huge contributions to the people of India.
Dr Kalam was the well known scientist, who served as a President of India for five years. He dedicated his whole life for the improvement of the society and he has always promoted good ideas. Mr Kalam was philanthropist, philosopher and a great leader. He was best in giving motivational speeches. He encouraged students the most. He was the key person behind country's technological development in various areas like rockets, missiles, fighter planes and many more.It is said that, he sacrificed his whole life for "two S" , Science and Students.
When Mr. kalam was president, he never opt for luxurious life as commonly each president possesses. He was a down to earth and most humble as a person. He used to treat his bodyguards, security men, cooks, managers, workers, driver as a family member. This influenced people of India. People started respecting each other as well as they started giving respect to the vendors, taxi drivers, workers, swappers etc. Thus Dr Kalam unknowingly contributed to the unity of the nation.
Dr Abdul Kalam has taken many important decisions as a president for the improvement of the nation. He initiated policies to improve schools, colleges, government agencies, various sectors, technological domain, public health department and human resources as well. He never use public resources for the personal benefits. The built up and success of the Indian Space Research Organization(ISRO) is mainly due to Mr Kalam. He was the one who helped India to achieve nuclear strength.
Thus, his tremendous efforts in technology, study, public domain, health and services, defense sector and mostly to betterment of society as a leader are the reason for choosing him as one of the best world leaders. Due to his good will and sparking personality Dr Kalam is the most loved president in history of India.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.319306930693 0.229887763892 139% => OK
Verbs: 0.118811881188 0.158761421928 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0866336633663 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0470297029703 0.046263068375 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0544554455446 0.0685040099705 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0915841584158 0.118717715034 77% => OK
Participles: 0.029702970297 0.0351676179071 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89048556028 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0247524752475 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0767326732673 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00247524752475 0.0209618222197 12% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00742574257426 0.0139019557991 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2146.0 2387.08602151 90% => OK
No of words: 349.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14899713467 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398280802292 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286532951289 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206303724928 0.174417080927 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14899713467 0.112833075102 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89048556028 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561604584527 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 62.3000691522 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1739130435 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7856982384 48.84282405 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3043478261 120.699889404 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1739130435 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.304347826087 0.644075263715 47% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 43.8272081724 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.45489161554 137% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357116534232 0.300154397459 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0960804968146 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0749244396661 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.471897786256 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141525328887 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130736541864 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747932958222 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.327214651424 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0699848894252 0.067059652881 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248297752163 0.210909579961 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747001796404 0.0618886996521 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.