You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager.
Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you to express my unsatisfaction about not being anyone responsive for defected oven which I bought last week.
My wife and I decided to buy a new oven and after surfing on the Internet and comparing different models and brands with regards to various factors like cost, warranty and guaranty and some others one, finally we bought the latest model of the oven from your shop. But after delivering it by your shipping service we found a big crash on the glass door.First I tried to make a phone call to your staff at the shop, but unfortunately, nobody did care my demand on replacing it with a new one and after a while, they did not respond my phone calls anymore.
Therefore, I want you to replace my crashed oven with new one, and if you do not pay enough attention to this request, I will take a legal action as soon as possible. So I am awaiting for your prompt response.
Your sincerely
Davod Kazemi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
... we found a big crash on the glass door.First I tried to make a phone call to your st...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: awaiting; waiting for
...gal action as soon as possible. So I am awaiting for your prompt response. Your sincerely ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219895287958 0.220444632235 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.146596858639 0.167888034529 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0732984293194 0.0606518309736 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0471204188482 0.0506257000042 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.130890052356 0.118615021944 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104712041885 0.107062808482 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0418848167539 0.041066498444 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48087581413 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0418848167539 0.0385302599488 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0732984293194 0.0714148451538 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00523560209424 0.0191574576366 27% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00523560209424 0.00930345855455 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 955.0 1141.60824742 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.134020619 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39548022599 5.53046319177 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.276836158192 0.284621296913 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.186440677966 0.211203875043 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.118644067797 0.133321485273 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0734463276836 0.0843313296314 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48087581413 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.622163163488 104% => OK
Word variations: 63.4517384827 62.8969750728 101% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 12.9587628866 46% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 29.5 16.4300151701 180% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.0091185475 44.7399317507 221% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.166666667 90.9928171075 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 16.4300151701 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 0.613754768223 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 48.1440677966 37.5504026743 128% => OK
Elegance: 1.12903225806 1.13073093955 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287188558373 0.331212695627 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112314107662 0.0927372745006 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0883670143075 0.0736520305886 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.737207539923 0.579516596996 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.234728677779 0.180689518051 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125514586321 0.122183219658 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605101684619 0.0765303033291 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.156468986103 0.211926503985 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0367597292761 0.0737400523855 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178252293305 0.203819188451 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360654217619 0.067151250289 54% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.45360824742 40% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 4.73195876289 21% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.56701030928 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 8.32989690722 36% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.