Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Other think access to much information creates problem. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People have been using internet to get convenient access to a considerable amount of information, which is valuable, in multiplicity of fields for some decades. I am in favor of the provided statement for two significant reasons, which I am going to elaborate on in the following essay.
First and foremost, internet is a broad area in which scientific information dominates a great part, and this large expanse is widening with each second as technology progresses. As a matter of fact, if we consider professors, students, and anyone who are interested in science to some extent, the importance of the internet cannot be neglected easily. Therefore, the scientific life and activity of a notable population of the world cannot proceed unless the internet is regarded as a key factor. For example, according to a study on how crucial the role of internet is in science and technology, conducted in Washington University in March 1, 2014, it is clearly understood that the future advancement of science and technology will be possible granted that the world is well adapted to the internet.
What’s more, the problem of having access to any information in any book can be readily addressed through the help of the internet, from which people, who lived before the internet advent, suffered a lot. There are, for instance, precious books in a few copies which people may not be able to use directly. However, they can be found on the internet not only more cheaply but also with just a short searching. Additionally, such information can be shared to any number of people despite it may not be feasible to do with real books. My own experience could be a suitable example to illustrate this case. Last semester, I was looking for the solution of an equation which could only be found in a rare reference book. As I searched its name on the internet, its PDF file appeared on the screen quickly. This process was not at all time consuming and expensive.
On the whole, providing people with a high amount of valuable information is one of its key roles for which it have been used a continually over time. This is primarily because it consists of a broad area of scientific information and facilitates accessing to books which don’t exist in large numbers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as a matter of fact', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217391304348 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.148741418764 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0869565217391 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0549199084668 0.046263068375 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0320366132723 0.0685040099705 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137299771167 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0480549199085 0.0351676179071 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88216132013 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0274599542334 0.0309702414327 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107551487414 0.0887237588012 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0228832951945 0.0209618222197 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0274599542334 0.0139019557991 198% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2287.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 386.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92487046632 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349740932642 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284974093264 0.251872472559 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.222797927461 0.174417080927 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147668393782 0.112833075102 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88216132013 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549222797927 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 62.124226189 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 24.125 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4004227296 48.84282405 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.9375 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 0.644075263715 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 52.6224093264 45.7405998639 115% => OK
Elegance: 1.70873786408 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335068520428 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109442962374 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0698412332535 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534404619124 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177372062667 0.151897553556 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132818571579 0.114077575197 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721889080918 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333710161753 0.336927656856 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0462385388976 0.067059652881 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238550917321 0.210909579961 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215988911752 0.0618886996521 35% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.