Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Governments have funded projects like dam , highways or flyovers for the welfare of the people as It is an institution for the people, by them and for them. While doing so government somewhat forgotten the marginalized and invaluable assets such as arts , which arrived way before the 100 Crores worth of projects and which cannot be quantified in the form of money.Therefore,I believe that government funding of arts is necessary for its growth as well as availability to the people.
The world has seen different art forms through out it’s time, ranging from music , painting , sculptures and dance. They have been prominently been a part of the human civilization , a form of expression which divulges the details of various cultures and giving us an insight of our rich history. The history can be depicted in this form by human and no other living being on this planet, it is due to our inane abilities which were honed by sharing of ideas and skills that we are able to produce masterpieces. Consider the pyramids of Egypt and the painting depicted inside them to give an idea of their rich civilization or the Taj Mahal – a powerful symbol of love which attracts tourists from all over the world to India. They were possible due to the importance given to them by their rulers and it is clearly visible that they were encouraged or even funded. Why wouldn’t they? These arts are the only proof of our rich past and it is important to carry on this legacy forward for the generations to come. However the current scenario doesn’t seem too bright for arts as it was maybe a 100 years ago. The days of renaissance are long gone where different arts forms were admired upon, the new age rather requires skills that can help the economy running and the value of arts is slowly diminishing.
People like M.F hussain maybe had an inane talent for painting which was honed thanks to his teachers and the encouragement piled upon his work , likewise the musical talent of The Beatles was known all over the world even when social media didn’t exist. The M.F hussain’s don’t just show up arbitrary , it was due to importance of these arts were they made to realize their talent , the talent which infuses our cultures and history. The government should set up programmes for arts especially for those who are deprived of the basic resources used to express them . Many of those who cant even met their basic demands cannot even think about pursuing arts , these marginalized people should therefore be introduced properly to the subject. Secondly, different art forms should be encouraged all over and their importance and cultural value should also be explained for their growth.
Government funding these art forms will indirectly help it achieve various objectives like by providing people a skill or maybe a job . Secondly The people working towards them would be able to make an impact on global scale and India being a land of rich cultures consisting of different cuisines , languages and even rituals , has produced skillful people in these forms of art which are renowned all over the world, the country can easily boast of its stupendous paintings , sculptures or expressive dance forms. Though it has huge potential for the people and the nation itself, it still has not been maxed out.
Considering the importance carried on by arts , the government should help them out before it is extinct for that it’s important to conserve these art forms in the age of monetary outlooks.
- At nearby Green Mountain College, which has more business courses and more job counselors than does Mira Vista College, 90 percent of last year's graduating seniors had job offers from prospective employers. But at Mira Vista College last year, only 70 pe 50
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts. 50
- At nearby Green Mountain College, which has more business courses and more job counselors than does Mira Vista College, 90 percent of last year's graduating seniors had job offers from prospective employers. But at Mira Vista College last year, only 70 pe 50
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'likewise', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230884557721 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.166416791604 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.071964017991 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0524737631184 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0644677661169 0.0444667217837 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116941529235 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0584707646177 0.0406280797675 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66624565565 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.023988005997 0.030933414821 78% => OK
Particles: 0.00599700149925 0.0016655270985 360% => OK
Determiners: 0.101949025487 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0179910044978 0.0249443105267 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0209895052474 0.0148568991511 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3545.0 2732.02544248 130% => OK
No of words: 610.0 452.878318584 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81147540984 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96972615649 4.58838876751 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314754098361 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237704918033 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168852459016 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106557377049 0.132149295362 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66624565565 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 219.290929204 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473770491803 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 58.209005197 55.4138127331 105% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 30.5 23.380412469 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.8449586213 59.4972553346 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.25 141.124799967 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 23.380412469 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.674092028746 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.21349557522 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 54.2704918033 51.4728631049 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.43386243386 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.564794996484 0.391690518653 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124972912466 0.123202303941 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0728965484803 0.077325440228 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.547377323008 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.199120991747 0.149214159877 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22417812237 0.161403998019 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122904029934 0.0892212321368 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.426541410605 0.385218514788 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0835626750468 0.0692045440612 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.395489465478 0.275328986314 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074743981018 0.0653680567796 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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