Write a letter to the bus company about something you lost on a bus. In your letter, give details of your bus trip, tell them what you lost, and explain what you'd like them to do.
Dear sir,
Greetings of the day. I am one of the regular travellers of your bus services for my daily travelling from my home to office. I am writing this letter to seek your help in tracking the bag which I have lost today morning on the bus. The bag was containing the file with some important official and personal documents which are very precious to me.
Actually, I travel daily from Akhbarnagar circle to the SG highway through the bus no. 72/3 which departs at 9:30 am from mentioned beginning point and reaches at my destination by 10:00 am. Today morning, I found that the bus was fully...
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Essay evaluation report
I forgot to lift my bag which I had kept in the luggage carrier what I realised after reaching the office.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
It was brown coloured soft bag
It was a brown coloured soft bag
Sentence: I would request you to check with the driver and conductor of the bus if they have receieved any unclaimed bag in the bus.
Error: receieved Suggestion: received
Sentence: It has two bucker at front and a brand name americal tourist on it.
Error: bucker Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Characters: 1136 1500
No. of Different Words: 155 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.319 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.56 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.438 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.073 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.312 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.31 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.66 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.127 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...p in tracking the bag which I have lost today morning on the bus. The bag was containing the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... lost today morning on the bus. The bag was containing the file with some important official a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: This morning
... reaches at my destination by 10:00 am. Today morning, I found that the bus was fully occupie...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... due to the rush of the festival, and I couldnt manage to secure any seat. I was carryi...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ided above the sitting arrangements. Now , while the station arrived , in hasty to...
^^
Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gements. Now , while the station arrived , in hasty to landing to my station, I fo...
^^
Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orgot to lift my bag which I had kept in the luggage carrier what I realised afte...
^^
Line 5, column 636, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e carrier what I realised after reaching the office. I would request you to c...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'if', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241992882562 0.220444632235 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.153024911032 0.167888034529 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0569395017794 0.0606518309736 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0249110320285 0.0506257000042 49% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.110320284698 0.118615021944 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124555160142 0.107062808482 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0533807829181 0.041066498444 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59276308193 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0391459074733 0.0385302599488 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0960854092527 0.0714148451538 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0106761565836 0.0191574576366 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017793594306 0.00930345855455 191% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1443.0 1141.60824742 126% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.134020619 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52873563218 5.53046319177 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78085437643 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.275862068966 0.284621296913 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23754789272 0.211203875043 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145593869732 0.133321485273 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.088122605364 0.0843313296314 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59276308193 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.622163163488 95% => OK
Word variations: 62.1615333752 62.8969750728 99% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 12.9587628866 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4 16.4300151701 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8802525727 44.7399317507 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 90.9928171075 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.4300151701 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.266666666667 0.613754768223 43% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.09278350515 382% => OK
Readability: 41.154789272 37.5504026743 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.45679012346 1.13073093955 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319272035201 0.331212695627 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116871846311 0.0927372745006 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0812545896475 0.0736520305886 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.548896939423 0.579516596996 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175246556481 0.180689518051 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115240458225 0.122183219658 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854656927816 0.0765303033291 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310312621738 0.211926503985 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.193480990185 0.0737400523855 262% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212730591379 0.203819188451 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340899138468 0.067151250289 51% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.45360824742 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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