Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic." Prevention is better than cure" .Out of the country's health budget, a larger proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Referring to the various health related survey of last few decades, we can conclude the need of education and awareness of health issues compare to the medications. Every year every country allocate a huge budged behind the wellness of their people, some adepts put forward the thought of utilize the huge amount of this wellness budget behind health awareness and preventive measures. In my view, It is certainly a wise thinking to prevent from disease rather to cure.
To commence with, Looking in to the current lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits, It is the pivotal requirement of time to create awareness among people toward balanced healthy lifestyle. If people eat healthy and follow regular regime schedules, half the battle would be won against disease. For instance, People eat junk food, avoid fruits, late night working , stressed work life, lake of physical workout ,comfortable lifestyle etc. lead to physical and psychological disorders like obesity, hypertension, diabetes and so on. By running health camps where people get free diet guidelines and physical workout plans based on their lifestyle and physic, can help to prevent many disease to prosper.
Moreover, spending budget to create health centres and community centres can serve dual purpose for the society i.e. health and social. People would be guided to acquire their hobbies like swimming ,scatting, dancing, playing sport which lead to develop a healthy society. Not only health, such arrangements provide platform for social gathering which lead to reduce stress related disease of the society .
What to add more, There are epidemic of many life harming diseases those requires spread of knowledge and prevention measures to restrict their proper in the society. For example, AIDS, TB,CANCER, are the some of those dangerous illness that can be prevented with the spread of awareness among the public.
All in all, I personally believe that medication save an affected individual but heath education can save the entire society. So, I strongly recommend to allocated wise budget to health education and prevention measures.
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every country allocate a huge budged behind the wellness of their people, some adepts put forward the thought of utilize the huge amount
every country allocates a huge budged behind the wellness of their people, some adepts put forward the thought of utilizing the huge amount
By running health camps where people get free diet guidelines and physical workout plans based on their lifestyle and physic, can help to prevent many disease to prosper.
Description: what is the subject for 'can help'?
There are epidemic of many life harming diseases those requires spread of knowledge and prevention measures
There are epidemic of many life harming diseases which require the spread of knowledge and prevention measures
medication save an affected individual
medications save an affected individual
I strongly recommend to allocated wise budget to health education and prevention measures.
I strongly recommend to allocate wise budget to health education and prevention measures.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 333 350
No. of Characters: 1731 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.272 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.198 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.494 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.224 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.631 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...k food, avoid fruits, late night working , stressed work life, lake of physical wo...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ssed work life, lake of physical workout ,comfortable lifestyle etc. lead to physi...
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Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...festyle and physic, can help to prevent many disease to prosper. Moreover, spending budge...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d to acquire their hobbies like swimming ,scatting, dancing, playing sport which l...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ce stress related disease of the society . What to add more, There are epidemic...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...What to add more, There are epidemic of many life harming diseases those requires sp...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun life seems to be countable; consider using: 'many lives'.
Suggestion: many lives
...What to add more, There are epidemic of many life harming diseases those requires spread ...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "requires spread" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'spread' or 'to be spread'.
Suggestion: spread; to be spread
...ny life harming diseases those requires spread of knowledge and prevention measures to...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , CANCER
...er in the society. For example, AIDS, TB,CANCER, are the some of those dangerous illnes...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
.... For example, AIDS, TB,CANCER, are the some of those dangerous illness that can be ...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.297872340426 0.247107183377 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.135638297872 0.155533422707 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101063829787 0.0946595960268 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0292553191489 0.0501214627716 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0265957446809 0.0437548338989 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0984042553191 0.122226691241 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0425531914894 0.0403226058552 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59481882388 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0478723404255 0.0326793684256 146% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0771276595745 0.0861772015684 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0186170212766 0.021408717616 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132978723404 0.011925033212 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2120.0 1933.35771543 110% => OK
No of words: 334.0 316.048096192 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.34730538922 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.467065868263 0.374742101984 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.353293413174 0.28420135186 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218562874251 0.203846283523 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125748502994 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59481882388 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.037074148 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61377245509 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 72.0474499512 60.7387585426 119% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.875 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.169143849 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 127.492653851 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.99599198397 250% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.2043413174 49.1944974215 114% => OK
Elegance: 2.29166666667 1.69124875643 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313963326109 0.332605444948 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110294705234 0.102741220458 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0703420111886 0.0668466124924 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553335270585 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148696970296 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123960977429 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624830364477 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.249346604574 0.324371583561 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0661573958817 0.0638462369009 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200059591453 0.228012699653 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576587206881 0.058150111329 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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