You borrowed some books from your school or collage library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit sick relative and can not return the books in time. Write a letter to the library, Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
Dear Sir,
I am a third year science student of your collage, Ms. Bhumika Suryavanshi. I am intended to writing this letter to convey my apologies for not returning the library books those are borrowed as on 10th July 2016.
It so happened that after getting issued the books from library, when I returned to my hostel, I received a message that one of our close relative has been admitted in to the hospital due to massive cardiac attack. I supposed to catch the first train to reach my native to attend him. In hefty, I completely forgot about the books and would not able to convey any of my friend to return them to the library. It is been more than 15 days of issuance of the book and I am aware that it can attract fines as per library rules.
I totally understand that there would be a requirement of those book by other students. So, I have guided one of my friend to submit those books on my behalf. I would request you to levy the fines by considering the circumstances I was in to.
I regret for the delay and appreciate your patience and cooperation in handling this issue.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
Bhumika Suryavanshi
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for not returning the library books those are borrowed as on 10th July 2016.
for not returning the library books which are borrowed as on 10th July 2016. //you have this issue in other essays
one of our close relative
one of our close relatives
It is been more than 15 days
It has been more than 15 days
one of my friend
one of my friends
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 209 250
No. of Characters: 907 1500
No. of Different Words: 126 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.802 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.34 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.518 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 59 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.929 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.484 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.758 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.127 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uance of the book and I am aware that it can attract fines as per library rules. ...
^^
Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est you to levy the fines by considering the circumstances I was in to. I reg...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'so', 'third', 'i suppose']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198237885463 0.220444632235 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.176211453744 0.167888034529 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.057268722467 0.0606518309736 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0308370044053 0.0506257000042 61% => OK
Pronouns: 0.123348017621 0.118615021944 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118942731278 0.107062808482 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0528634361233 0.041066498444 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5743494356 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0616740088106 0.0385302599488 160% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0837004405286 0.0714148451538 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176211453744 0.0191574576366 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00881057268722 0.00930345855455 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1162.0 1141.60824742 102% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.134020619 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55980861244 5.53046319177 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78085437643 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.296650717703 0.284621296913 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22009569378 0.211203875043 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138755980861 0.133321485273 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0622009569378 0.0843313296314 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5743494356 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617224880383 0.622163163488 99% => OK
Word variations: 61.7813653957 62.8969750728 98% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.4300151701 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6764396252 44.7399317507 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.636363636 90.9928171075 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.4300151701 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.613754768223 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 41.009569378 37.5504026743 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.12 1.13073093955 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443882570855 0.331212695627 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11162640218 0.0927372745006 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0721000280766 0.0736520305886 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.621394433753 0.579516596996 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168027043753 0.180689518051 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175475372616 0.122183219658 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118116469004 0.0765303033291 154% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250954358351 0.211926503985 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.148687714849 0.0737400523855 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244712032404 0.203819188451 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100087378641 0.067151250289 149% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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