Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.Why is this happening‚ and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Crime rate has dramatically inclined in recent time and has became headache of thriving nations. Since technology has taken the front seat, it has become a cake walk for criminal to commit crimes in no time. this essay will examine the reason behind committing crime of former criminal and some possible solution to eradicate this problem.
There are numerous reasons which are encouraging former criminal to commit crime again. Firstly, after committing first crime, criminal usually get in contact with professional criminals which lead them to perform more crimes after being free from imprisonment. To be specific, Jail is always full with gangster and drug mafias, and prisoners are always kept in bunches due to less space which allows them to interact with each other. Thus, they plan something big in jail and countdown of becoming criminal starts. What is more, people does not give criminals respect that they had before being criminal and always consider them suspect which force them to get engage in criminal activities again
There are few remedies to root-out this problem. First and foremost, There should not be that strict captivity for small culprits and thieves and they ought to be kept separately. Because long imprisonment and friendship with professional criminal in jail tempt them to commit more crime. Furthermore, education is know as third eye. Usually criminals belong to lack of educational background. however, sound education should be provided them by jail authorities during their sentence in order to make them good inhabitants when they are free man. Last but not the least, free mind is home of devils. Hence, employment ought to be arranged by government so that criminals can be kept busy to eliminate their criminal thought and keeping them busy can be a handsome idea to do so
To recapitulate, a criminal was never a criminal, he born as a innocent, got hail as a innocent. therefore, government should try to find out the reasons which encourage people to commit so that crime can be eliminated and so is criminal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thus', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221621621622 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.202702702703 0.155533422707 130% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110810810811 0.0946595960268 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0513513513514 0.0501214627716 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0432432432432 0.0437548338989 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0486486486486 0.0403226058552 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65282123717 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0513513513514 0.0326793684256 157% => OK
Particles: 0.0027027027027 0.00163938923432 165% => OK
Determiners: 0.0459459459459 0.0861772015684 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0243243243243 0.021408717616 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0189189189189 0.011925033212 159% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2058.0 1933.35771543 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 316.048096192 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07079646018 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365781710914 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268436578171 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218289085546 0.203846283523 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120943952802 0.137316102897 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65282123717 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.037074148 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560471976401 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 61.491675437 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1875 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3951087221 49.517814964 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.625 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 48.0311578171 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.24545454545 1.69124875643 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272715341709 0.332605444948 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0975393827879 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0936565801682 0.0668466124924 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470307527922 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164036147365 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990710406953 0.134430193775 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563292580265 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32713408297 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.095259357492 0.0638462369009 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177625740544 0.228012699653 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359602464805 0.058150111329 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.68436873747 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.5751503006 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.