Some people believe that to have a manager as old person is good for the company, whereas other thinks that it is not good.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Now a days, many organizations wants to achieve more success in this cometitive business environment. So, for that they are going for the enthusiastic manager, who will provide them greater success in this competitive world.I belive to have a experienced manager, will gave them a good result.However in such conditions it is not true.
For the success in the free market, many people thinks that to have an experienced person for the post of manager will gave greater stability to the firm in open marketing world. But there are also some of them, who really thinks to have a young and energetic person as a manager will gave them a boost, which is much required in this growing needy world. There are multifarious advantages of having a young managers.First and foremost,is that they are enthusiastic as well as energetic which will help company to get quick success.Furthermore,it will prove good for the organization because of their quick decision making technique.But, apart from all there are certain drawbacks of this also, and which are the possibly the most effective for the companies progress.The salient one is that,sometimes this quick decision taking ability will put all organization in the major loss,when it goes wrong at all.This is not tolerable at all in this cruel business world.
Where on other hand some people assert that to have a person with a lot of experience can be called sometimes as a old ones, will be beneficial for the organization.They already faced lot of difficult situation such as crisis and downgrading of stocks.So,they can handle that kind of situation with quite ease.For example, in this kind of critical situation, young ones will do panic and may took wrong decision which is not effective.
They will provide a great working skills as well as surviving skills at the time of catastrophe.
For example,I was working for a firm which has great market value, and at one point our organization too faced a extreme crisis.But,we were lucky to have a experienced person as a manager,who is quite old.Due to his abilities, we survived a major loss.
To recapitulate,to have a such person as a manager,who has greater experience of different market tweaks as well as the onerous situations where a company will be in the problem.So, the one can easily use his practical knowledge and skills that he got from work to control the negative outcome and provide stabilization.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'apart from', 'for example', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206278026906 0.247107183377 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.139013452915 0.155533422707 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125560538117 0.0946595960268 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0560538116592 0.0501214627716 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.042600896861 0.0437548338989 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121076233184 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0201793721973 0.0403226058552 50% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.1421455467 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0269058295964 0.0326793684256 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112107623318 0.0861772015684 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0336322869955 0.021408717616 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0269058295964 0.011925033212 226% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2422.0 1933.35771543 125% => OK
No of words: 402.0 316.048096192 127% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02487562189 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325870646766 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251243781095 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179104477612 0.203846283523 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141791044776 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1421455467 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482587064677 0.56093040696 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.2927587342 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0891783567 56% => OK
Sentence length: 44.6666666667 20.7743622355 215% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 157.431309732 49.517814964 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 269.111111111 127.492653851 211% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.6666666667 20.7743622355 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 0.814263465372 218% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 3.99599198397 951% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 69.7910447761 49.1944974215 142% => OK
Elegance: 1.46226415094 1.69124875643 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346050067907 0.332605444948 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.199247798048 0.102741220458 194% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0796817510263 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.809838845951 0.534860350844 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.21126983658 0.148594505496 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169324783956 0.134430193775 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717439974829 0.0742795772207 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.239711352346 0.324371583561 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.120182872238 0.0638462369009 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189884400691 0.228012699653 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688013883043 0.058150111329 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.