You are going to travel soon. Write to your neighbour and ask for help. In your letter say,
- why do you need help?
- what do you need her to do and when?
- What should he/ she do if anything happens?
Dear Sneha,
Hope you are doing best at your health. I am writing this letter intending to receive your cooperation for taking care of my pet Bruno for few days. I have to travel abroad for some important official project on Monday morning. I would request your helping hand in taking care of my pet in my absence.
I could have sent Bruno to my parent's home, but, unfortunately, they are also out of the town for few days. Moreover, the caretaker of Bruno is also fallen sick . In this circumstances, you are the only hope for me whom I can rely upon during any emergency assistance. Bruno is...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 221 250
No. of Characters: 938 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.856 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.244 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.308 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.812 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.974 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.661 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
can you point out what is the
can you point out what is the best thing in this letter due to what I got this score? I want to understand the strong side to be consistent.
Well, when the score reaches
Well, when the score reaches 8.0 or over, first of all, there are almost no flaws or tiny flaws, second, need to address the topic very closely with enough content (the more, the better). Third, well-polished sentences.
But, one more important factor to decide whether the essay is 8.5 or not is: can we (human graders) write a better essay than this essay? If the answer is NO, then the essay can get 8.5 or 9.0.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ant official project on Monday morning. I would request your helping hand in taki...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...aking care of my pet in my absence. I could have sent Bruno to my parents hom...
^
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e caretaker of Bruno is also fallen sick . In this circumstances, you are the only...
^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...taker of Bruno is also fallen sick . In this circumstances, you are the only hope fo...
^^^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he only hope for me whom I can rely upon during any emergency assistance. Bruno i...
^^
Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ice a day i.e in the morning and evening , along with a warm bath in the morning. ...
^^
Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...use much inconvenience to you as well as you will enjoy Brunos company indeed. ...
^^
Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you will enjoy Brunos company indeed. Waiting for your positive response. Y...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241803278689 0.220444632235 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.147540983607 0.167888034529 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0491803278689 0.0606518309736 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0614754098361 0.0506257000042 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.122950819672 0.118615021944 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118852459016 0.107062808482 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0409836065574 0.041066498444 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39650223298 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286885245902 0.0385302599488 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0696721311475 0.0714148451538 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245901639344 0.0191574576366 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00819672131148 0.00930345855455 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1206.0 1141.60824742 106% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.134020619 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43243243243 5.53046319177 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.243243243243 0.284621296913 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171171171171 0.211203875043 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0990990990991 0.133321485273 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0630630630631 0.0843313296314 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39650223298 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 65.9762092261 62.8969750728 105% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8571428571 16.4300151701 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9610370987 44.7399317507 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 90.9928171075 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.4300151701 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.613754768223 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.09278350515 382% => OK
Readability: 32.9742599743 37.5504026743 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.20987654321 1.13073093955 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281260707953 0.331212695627 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0605667152375 0.0927372745006 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0565485485278 0.0736520305886 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518351022539 0.579516596996 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180272517856 0.180689518051 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933089431246 0.122183219658 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504178629132 0.0765303033291 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.159499699214 0.211926503985 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113984486474 0.0737400523855 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168713344409 0.203819188451 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473045398703 0.067151250289 70% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.45360824742 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.0206185567 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 4.73195876289 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.56701030928 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.