Today's society provide people with various ways to lose weight, such as special diets or exercise regimes. Many people believe though that poor food and today's lifestyle should be addressed first. What is your viewpoint of the situation?
It is universally accepted that the precaution is better than the cure. Our ancestors who were following the healthy lifestyle and taking healthy food were used to remain healthy and strong in their later age. Many exercise regimes and diets are prevalent in today's society to shred-off the extra fat from the body, however, many people believe in curtailing poor eating habit and altering modern lifestyle to address the emerging issues of health. My inclination accords with the later statement which can be elaborated in following paragraphs.
To commence with, although the exercise and diet ...
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Essay evaluation report
By reducing the use of the machines for routine work can give required exert to physic to live healthy.
By reducing the use of the machines for routine work, it can give required exert to physic to live healthy.
reducing the use of the machines for routine work can give required exert to physic to live healthy.
flaws:
It is a little bit off the topic. The topic is how to lose weight, but the essay is about how to live a health life.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 343 350
No. of Characters: 1709 1500
No. of Different Words: 198 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.304 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.983 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.539 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.663 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.312 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.512 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.072 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and wake up late in the morning has the detrimental effects on physical as well ...
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Line 6, column 745, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e work can give required exert to physic to live healthy. All in all, I strong...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22311827957 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.163978494624 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.126344086022 0.0946595960268 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0591397849462 0.0501214627716 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0268817204301 0.0437548338989 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115591397849 0.122226691241 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0618279569892 0.0403226058552 153% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60554965091 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0376344086022 0.0326793684256 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00537634408602 0.00163938923432 328% => OK
Determiners: 0.0860215053763 0.0861772015684 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0161290322581 0.021408717616 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0161290322581 0.011925033212 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2094.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10495626822 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393586005831 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309037900875 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215743440233 0.203846283523 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128279883382 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60554965091 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577259475219 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 64.8976147318 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8666666667 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.061758198 49.517814964 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.814263465372 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 53.7704567541 49.1944974215 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.60215053763 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269922361598 0.332605444948 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107609706946 0.102741220458 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0744662946696 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.603473660763 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.213339163303 0.148594505496 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11268652953 0.134430193775 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527186698685 0.0742795772207 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.253906772349 0.324371583561 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.148996092742 0.0638462369009 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169035477132 0.228012699653 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571722944389 0.058150111329 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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