Universities should spend more money in buying facilities than hiring famous professors.
At the turn of the new century, with the development human’s modern society no one can turn a blind eye to the enormous both direct and indirect effects of education in society blooming and thriving. Actually, a simple recognition of this argument lends our discussion to the question of how student can attain high quality knowledge with being accepted in a prestigious university. Although some people adhere to this belief that universities can improve their ranking by purchasing amenities, in my vantage point employee prominent professors have profound impacts on the level of literate of students and the university’s ranking since professors can inspire positive incentive in students, and also attract more ingenious students.
The first aspect to point out is that what provokes the university to hire a well-known professor is improving incentive in students. It goes without saying that in the competitive world of today having a potential incentive is a requirement for student to enhance their knowledge as well as make headway. Without a shadow of doubt a professional professor can make a superb incentive in students. Not only can he teach up-date information, but also he answers to all students’ questions patiently. Take a case of university that make use of a lot of facilities for instance; however, if it does not a skilled professor to learn student how they can use them, it will not a prestige university. Consequently, a prominent professor can make the biggest contribution to a society blooming because he can educate to student how struggle for dreams and work hardly without any negative energy. Actually, a university without professional doctors neither enhances the level of knowledge in students nor has a high rank between other ones. As a result, a skilled professor has pivotal roles in the developing a university and its students.
The further subtle point is that attracting ingenious students can be considered another advantage of a prominent professor. It is absolutely undeniable that nowadays with the developing human’s modern society more and more students tend to experience education abroad. In fact, according a recent statistic in my country every year a large number of student emigration in a developed country for continuing their studying. Without any doubt, being famous professors has profound impact on assimilating smart students all over the world. For example, in the high rank universities, there are several professors that it can tempt smart student to making efforts for being accepted by these universities because they can work with these professors and improve their knowledge. As a consequence, attracting smart students is remarkable benefit of being a well-known professor in a university.
To put everything in a nutshell, a broad look over the main points and discussions reveal the fact that we are living in an age in which education has a pivotal role as far as a development of a nation is concerned. It is crystal clear that professional professors in universities have crucial impacts on the rate of student’s knowledge and ranking universities because of improving students’ inspiration and attracting smart ones. It is high time we stopped overlooking the fact that just with high quality amenities a university can be a prestige. Have you ever seen a high rank university without famous professors? I absolutely believe no!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positive incentive in students, and also attract more ingenious students. The fi...
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Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'work'.
Suggestion: hardly work
... to student how struggle for dreams and work hardly without any negative energy. Actually, ...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...cent statistic in my country every year a large number of student emigration in a developed count...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267326732673 0.229887763892 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.140264026403 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0907590759076 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0379537953795 0.046263068375 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0412541254125 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13201320132 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.049504950495 0.0351676179071 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.16710429526 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0214521452145 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0016501650165 0.00188951952338 87% => OK
Determiners: 0.117161716172 0.0887237588012 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.023102310231 0.0209618222197 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0115511551155 0.0139019557991 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3439.0 2387.08602151 144% => OK
No of words: 545.0 408.028673835 134% => OK
Chars per words: 6.31009174312 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.416513761468 0.338922669872 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.365137614679 0.251872472559 145% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25871559633 0.174417080927 148% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.203669724771 0.112833075102 181% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.16710429526 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464220183486 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.823306628 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7727272727 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5021113266 48.84282405 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.318181818 120.699889404 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7727272727 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.681818181818 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 61.2864887406 45.7405998639 134% => OK
Elegance: 2.04511278195 1.45489161554 141% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114229587815 0.300154397459 38% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0985122462765 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.056549202618 0.0752933317313 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.450737391207 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137411254173 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464818593447 0.114077575197 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389181737861 0.0781384742642 50% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.445943610371 0.336927656856 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.013509855708 0.067059652881 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953537909279 0.210909579961 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368786441633 0.0618886996521 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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