Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving
Discuss the arguments for and again keeping pets
To what extent do you agree?
The friendship between human beings and animals is very widespread from ancient times, and it is also popular in today's world. No one can deny its favorable effects. However, some people still prefer not to keep them.
Firstly, it is an undeniable fact that keeping pets is great for our health. Spending time with animals is enjoyable and it makes us happy. Furthermore, it is a great source of companionship to older people which is very common in Europe and the USA.
On the other hand, it is a fact that pets often make home dirty. If the owner cannot teach it very well, it can cause serious problems.
Also, keeping pets can be costly. You should spend money to make sure that he is always healthy. Buying essential needs: food, grooming kits, and other accessories can be very expensive. In addition, some owners spend too much money for animal clothes. They use strange shoes and dresses for making it beautiful which are restless sometimes.
In short, because of animals are true residents of our world besides of humans, it is our duty to care and protect them. And in my opinion, people should do it wisely and not forget that they are just animals.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'in addition', 'in short', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.195744680851 0.247107183377 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.148936170213 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11914893617 0.0946595960268 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0851063829787 0.0501214627716 170% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0936170212766 0.0437548338989 214% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0978723404255 0.122226691241 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0212765957447 0.0403226058552 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34469289481 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0170212765957 0.0326793684256 52% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0425531914894 0.0861772015684 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0297872340426 0.021408717616 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00851063829787 0.011925033212 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1228.0 1933.35771543 64% => OK
No of words: 205.0 316.048096192 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99024390244 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20517956788 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326829268293 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20487804878 0.28420135186 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.121951219512 0.203846283523 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0731707317073 0.137316102897 53% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34469289481 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.037074148 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.56093040696 113% => OK
Word variations: 64.8335584745 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.6666666667 20.7743622355 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7071633711 49.517814964 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8666666667 127.492653851 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7743622355 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 34.1544715447 49.1944974215 69% => OK
Elegance: 0.961038961039 1.69124875643 57% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325926774184 0.332605444948 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0537546437492 0.102741220458 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.050234978606 0.0668466124924 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.52242441678 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159795429355 0.148594505496 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110833888372 0.134430193775 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574205235226 0.0742795772207 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.211128759279 0.324371583561 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0646694342054 0.0638462369009 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18489394359 0.228012699653 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484987002797 0.058150111329 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.