Some Governments say how many children a family can have in their country should be strictly controlled. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. Is It sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way?
Nowadays, some countries struggle problem of over population. Some governments ready to take harsh measurements to control the population. One of such measurements is compelling inhabitants to pay taxes for children. To some extant I agree with this statement, however there are some details need to be clarified.
There are some under-developed countries which have the overpopulation problem. The inhabitants related to the middle class tend to have no more than two children in family. However, people who got bogged in poverty do not have such restrictions. From the one point of view, if governments will tax them for children they will become more poor and miserable. However, sometimes such harsh restrictions can encourage people to avoid of giving a birth to more than 2 babies, which wouldn’t have a happy life due poverty.
Such country as Chine found an excellent resolution of this problem. Long time ago they taxed people for children, but they also utilized their youth into labor market. The most part of Chinese population is doing the job in particular field. They are number one in electronic production in the world and will probably be the first in every sort of manufacturing soon.
In general, tax charging for the children is not the most efficient resolve of the problem. There is another solution, such as information in the mass media that can motivate people to have as many children as they can maintain. There are rich families who can support more than two children. They will ably to give a good education for children in future and as a result, our country will have well-educated and smart people who can benefit the whole country.
In conclusion, people’ control through taxes is good enough solution for particular cases, however it is not the best resolving of problem in rich and high-developed countries.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'in general', 'in particular', 'sort of', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248538011696 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.131578947368 0.155533422707 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114035087719 0.0946595960268 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0438596491228 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0321637426901 0.0437548338989 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116959064327 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0175438596491 0.0403226058552 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.91895362152 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321637426901 0.0326793684256 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0877192982456 0.0861772015684 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0292397660819 0.021408717616 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0175438596491 0.011925033212 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1857.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08852459016 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327868852459 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27868852459 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209836065574 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144262295082 0.137316102897 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91895362152 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 57.1391735825 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.9444444444 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9472430018 49.517814964 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 127.492653851 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.814263465372 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 44.8132969035 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.84507042254 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477274172778 0.332605444948 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10557231322 0.102741220458 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0691731338725 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517133560122 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168460139308 0.148594505496 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163088687791 0.134430193775 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759382110271 0.0742795772207 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.286510052859 0.324371583561 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.052266361639 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288804156809 0.228012699653 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328933813422 0.058150111329 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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