The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.
The pie charts illustrate the primary reasons of coming in and out to UK in 2007.
In general, despite of the various factors for migration to/from the UK, landing a definite job takes the biggest proportion.
Specifically, having a job accounted the largest percentage in migrating to UK, similarly in emigration with 30% and 29% respectively. A large number of people departed to UK, 22%, because they were looking for a job, though only 12% of the total population coming in for the same purpose.
Another contributing factor that influenced people to transfer to UK was formal education at just over of a quarter, however, surprisingly, a minority (4%) flee to UK for this.
In addition, both immigration and emigration shares almost the same percentage at 15% (less than a fifth) and 13% in order, to join or accompanying their family member. A total of 32% for those with "other" reasons or did not give reason why they emigrated, this accounted for only 17% with regards to immigration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...igration with 30% and 29% respectively. A large number of people departed to UK, 22%, because the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'similarly', 'so', 'as for', 'in addition', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246305418719 0.268076937826 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.103448275862 0.116061578633 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0738916256158 0.0759168565197 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0492610837438 0.0366838410393 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0147783251232 0.0131127313244 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15763546798 0.155750635184 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0443349753695 0.0379272487307 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06782734616 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0394088669951 0.0210936926555 187% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.108374384236 0.0948980150116 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00985221674877 0.00967000014798 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1011.0 1161.00487805 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.9 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01785714286 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369047619048 0.337110787985 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279761904762 0.247514529752 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190476190476 0.171178102325 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142857142857 0.112407865282 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06782734616 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.546246751206 117% => OK
Word variations: 60.7236090476 49.3433353143 123% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0094962315 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2365440879 42.9750493124 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.428571429 135.714022679 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.0094962315 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 0.689975730869 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 51.9761904762 47.7609492067 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.67647058824 2.94281807926 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414260363962 0.418131533498 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133539934634 0.181151798455 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.061737457344 0.0850326197045 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.808446933015 0.706616315825 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172889681851 0.157042692854 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234710007789 0.228904883108 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141450421186 0.108899403657 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255568691985 0.367819155151 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0967096031764 0.0812612215331 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282350034166 0.316326947829 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141334424884 0.0921553760075 153% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.