Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most experiences in our lives that seem difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future.
We are facing different experiences daily and those are difficult to overcome at the time of event. However, these experiences will be useful and valuable in the later in life. Since people experienced with those difficult tasks, they can manage to solve other difficult tasks based on this experience. Therefore, I believe that the current challenged tasks are worth more value in the future than that of easy tasks.
Every day, people have to face the different experiences. For example, people may face new clients at work or involve with new projects and this can be considered as difficult tasks. Those tasks seem difficult because people have to step out of their comfort zones and face the new experiences. Or these tasks may involve with mastering of new skills to complete the tasks or may involve with adapt the new environments to complete the tasks. If people have to meet new clients, they may have to gather information about clients from the background to other external factors. If people have to take a new project, they may have to learn new technical skills. Therefore, all these efforts and time taking tasks can be appeared as a difficult task.
However, those experiences will be useful in the future. Since people had experienced those difficult tasks, they can use these experiences as a basis to solve other new experiences or tasks. For instance, when I had to reconcile a single account for the month end, it was difficult at first because I had to master various technical and accounting skills to complete the tasks. However, this becomes easier later on and as a result, I can now be able to complete monthly account reconciliation as a whole. We can conclude from this example, the challenged tasks which were the reconciliation of single account are the foundation for the future tasks (reconciliation of monthly accounts). Therefore, current challenged tasks are the foundation for the future events.
In conclusion, people face the different experiences and different tasks every day. Even though those are difficult to handle at the first, because people have to use of new skill to complete the tasks, these can be the foundation for the future situations. Thus, the challenged tasks are more valuable than that of easy tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 646, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tasks'' or 'task's'?
Suggestion: tasks'; task's
...count are the foundation for the future tasks reconciliation of monthly accounts. The...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215311004785 0.247107183377 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.153110047847 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122009569378 0.0946595960268 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0311004784689 0.0501214627716 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0287081339713 0.0437548338989 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117224880383 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0215311004785 0.0403226058552 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72444132894 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0454545454545 0.0326793684256 139% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11961722488 0.0861772015684 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0334928229665 0.021408717616 156% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00478468899522 0.011925033212 40% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2264.0 1933.35771543 117% => OK
No of words: 378.0 316.048096192 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98941798942 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351851851852 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248677248677 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185185185185 0.203846283523 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132275132275 0.137316102897 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72444132894 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.037074148 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.375661375661 0.56093040696 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.868008909 60.7387585426 64% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2876938454 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 127.492653851 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 43.7677248677 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.66292134831 1.69124875643 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297804686386 0.332605444948 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141830797481 0.102741220458 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110255161167 0.0668466124924 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512415764949 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118770365971 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140562278326 0.134430193775 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781493566114 0.0742795772207 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.457379149544 0.324371583561 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104354402853 0.0638462369009 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252726417585 0.228012699653 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486395099639 0.058150111329 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.