For decades, space has inspired the human imagination. There are many who feel that space travel is a waste of time and resources, yet others believe that it brings many benefits to society. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion?
A space has been unknown and mysterious places which inspired the human imagination for a long time. Due to insufficient information about the space, it creates magnificent stories and rumours about space travels. However, some people argue that space travel is wasteful because of financial and time reasons, which can be used to solve the current issues occurring on Earth whereas other people believe that this is beneficial for technical and scientific development. While I understand the current issues on Earth are urgent solve, the potential development in scientific research and technical development are worth more for the future generations.
A space research has developed and activated for less than 10 years. Like this, people are still new in this field. There are so many experiments, researches and developments should be conducted before space travels are available to the public. In other words, the finances and time to develop space travel can be wasteful. If these finances and time were used to solve current issues occurring on Earth such as poverty and the public health, these issues had been long gone. Therefore, the money invested in space travel is mere a dream for people.
However, the space travel involves with various developments, namely; science, technology and experimental fields. By developing all those areas, the country’s economic status and the human’s daily lives will be improved. The reason for this is that scientific measure or approaches and technologies are used in other fields where it can develop the crop fields to produce double the products or enhance the nutritional value so that it will put halt on the world’s poverty issue. Since the space travel research involves with the conducting of lab experiments and that will improve scientific fields where it would find the cure for the diseases. Hence, the development and availability of space travels provide benefits to the world in every field.
In my opinion, the technological advancement or knowledge to develop space travel researches can be used to solve many Earth's issues rather than use the research money to solve the current issues. Because the use of research money now means lose of opportunity cost for the future development and it will not solve the problem at once. In other words, the use of advanced scientific technologies to solve the poverty and the public health as whole can solve the earth issue and these are worth spending the money.
In conclusion, space travels can be seemed far away and impossible to achieve and thus, the money and time used on this seems wasteful. However, the money and time to develop in this field is the ultimate solution in the long run as those technical and researches can be used in other fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'space research'.
Suggestion: Space research
...worth more for the future generations. A space research has developed and activated for less th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'whereas', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266798418972 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.142292490119 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110671936759 0.0946595960268 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0335968379447 0.0501214627716 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0138339920949 0.0437548338989 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108695652174 0.122226691241 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0375494071146 0.0403226058552 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73661904855 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0256916996047 0.0326793684256 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112648221344 0.0861772015684 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0256916996047 0.021408717616 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00790513833992 0.011925033212 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2780.0 1933.35771543 144% => OK
No of words: 454.0 316.048096192 144% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12334801762 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20517956788 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.363436123348 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26872246696 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187224669604 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129955947137 0.137316102897 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73661904855 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.037074148 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453744493392 0.56093040696 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.365034122 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2072949002 49.517814964 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.814263465372 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 49.572246696 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.17708333333 1.69124875643 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363416905893 0.332605444948 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132607505347 0.102741220458 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0900998655381 0.0668466124924 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.58307148498 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165578145105 0.148594505496 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161411475868 0.134430193775 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555646284547 0.0742795772207 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.465556805509 0.324371583561 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0625294617411 0.0638462369009 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257429789729 0.228012699653 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561602695962 0.058150111329 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.