Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Throughout the history people have faced a lot of problems that have led to social tension among different nations or countries. Nationalism can be stated as one of the main international problems. A lot of measures have been taken to prevent people from expressing excessive patriotism and many people think popular sport events, such as football World Cup, Olympic Games and etc. can be very useful means to put the patriotic feelings of people in a right way. I agree with this idea as a sport fan and I will try to explain my view point below.
First of all, in my opinion great sport occasions...
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Sentence: First of all, in my opinion great sport occasions are very succesful method to bring people belonging to various nations and countries togeher.
Error: togeher Suggestion: together
Error: succesful Suggestion: successful
Sentence: Secondly, when we watch sport events, we observe a lot of sportsmen, whose national identities are different from us, as we appreciate them as representatives of their nations, when we feel sympathy for them, we usually feel sypmathy for their nation.
Error: sypmathy Suggestion: sympathy
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