College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Encouragement to pursue the career of choice is next to flourish the path of the dream. It may end up without job but the satisfaction will be limitless. When a person leads to interest rather than sheep race, he will end up with fruitful results. From the pragmatic view, it is not possible to get success every time by following your choice instead of trend but latter has similar chances of failure. The college student has various streams to choose among, following his heart than the jobs trend. Students should be bolstered to choose a future of the interest to find out their limit.
Science has infinite possibility to discover that can serve the humanity and the planet. An engineer can opt among more than 50 kinds of fields of engineering. The boom of jobs is not necessarily there in all streams but the world should not lack with experts of each kind. If a student desires to be a Civil Engineer but takes Computer Science engineering because of scope in Computer Science, he will lesser interest in the field and may or may not get the job in the end. But, If he opts Civil engineering and works hard to get all his knowledge of the field, He will an expert and will definitely end up in the job sooner or later.
Art is sometimes considered as the gift of god. Artists are born with some special talent that can not be achieved by reading of any book. If an art lover will study the medical science or engineering, he will not only kills the artist in him but also will not be a good doctor or engineer or any other profession. Similar to science, there are unlimited possibilities in any art that can pushed more to extent, if Jobs will be overlooked than the passion.
The interest for subject to pursue the career is always above over the trend to filthy jobs. I have pursued my engineering in Civil Stream as my passion and end up in a very good Job with the satite of own desires. At the same time, there was fashion of Computer engineering that resulted in Jobs in an MNC. I still consider myself as fortuitous enough to burgeon my career of my choice rather than trend.
To assert my point, The Choice of desired subject or career not always ends up with a job and the same possibility lies in the other part of the argument. The encouragement of jobs rather than the interest will make the students no less than robots, who are working just some penny. The regret will always lie in them of not getting the likely career.
- The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals. 50
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs. 58
- Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear. 16
- In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. 50
- The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 220, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'kill'
Suggestion: kill
...cience or engineering, he will not only kills the artist in him but also will not be ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'as for']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242738589212 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.143153526971 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.051867219917 0.0880659088768 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0580912863071 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0435684647303 0.0444667217837 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128630705394 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0248962655602 0.0406280797675 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44621573468 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0331950207469 0.030933414821 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0124481327801 0.0016655270985 747% => OK
Determiners: 0.118257261411 0.0997080785238 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0414937759336 0.0249443105267 166% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0103734439834 0.0148568991511 70% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2454.0 2732.02544248 90% => OK
No of words: 448.0 452.878318584 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47767857143 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308035714286 0.366273622748 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.200892857143 0.280924506359 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122767857143 0.200843997647 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0602678571429 0.132149295362 46% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.44621573468 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 219.290929204 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470982142857 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 52.4908699497 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3636363636 23.380412469 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4465121633 59.4972553346 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 23.380412469 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.674092028746 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 40.4529220779 51.4728631049 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.6186440678 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304737746925 0.391690518653 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109847845509 0.123202303941 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0867893058052 0.077325440228 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538406094207 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141267259732 0.149214159877 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132431765612 0.161403998019 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886020530482 0.0892212321368 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.407894696764 0.385218514788 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0965762772524 0.0692045440612 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217639154954 0.275328986314 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593401540144 0.0653680567796 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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