More and more fathers taking a break from their careers so that they can stay at home and take care of their children while their wives work. This is better for the family than having both parents work full-time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, there are increasing husbands in their families choose to stay in to look after their children instead of going out to work. Many people insist on the view that this will help them build up a healthier families than dual-career families. As far as I am concerned, I tend to agree with this statement as the reasons below.
On the one hand, in the gender-blind society, it is no longer necessary for men to assume the responsibility to pay for their families' living expense and their wives take care of the children at home. Conversely, it is not uncommon to see that many...
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Sentence: Conversely, it is not uncommon to see that many families are the other way round, because men also have equal capacity as women to handle the household matters.
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Sentence: In conclusion, as the promotion of sexual equality, the phenomenon of house-husband is understandable, and this will creates benefit to the families because their children will be guided and controlled when they leave school.
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Suggestion: Refer to will and creates
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