Some people think that studying from the past offers no benefits to today’s life while others believe that history is a valuable source of information for us. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The present is existed because there is a history. From the past mistakes, we can evolve ourselves and society by acknowledging of past mistakes. However, due to the fast pace of society and a massive information, knowing of historical events seem too much burden. In this essay will discuss both aspects on histories before reaching a reasonable conclusion.
We are currently residing in an information society. The amount of information and knowledge we are gathering a day is 100,000 times more than that of in 19th century. Because people are busy catching up with the current news and events, they would easily get lost track of the past events and as a result of this, the past information becomes irrelevant. Therefore, historical information is too much to follow on top of current news and it seems no benefits to current lifestyles.
However, people have developed society from the past mistakes or past events. For example, Edison failed more than 10,000 times to make a light bulb before he made a huge scientific breakthrough. This would be the same for other inventions and which helped to level off the standard of living. Nowadays, all the diversity of fields such as legislation, military, economy, science and philosophy are the results of the past mistakes. As a result of this, the recognition of the historical events is vital because it has a direct correlation between the present consequences.
In my opinion, while I understand that there is too much information to gather as we are currently living in an Information Age era, historical events is vital because the potential prevention can occur. For example, economy downturn occurs every 9 years and which can be prepared for the next economy depression. Since lifestyles are repetitive and periodic and as a result of this, knowing of historical events can be helpful to our lifestyles because we can prepare before any events occur.
In conclusion, even though there is humongous information is updated frequently and at a rapid rate, which creates the difficulty for people to adapt the past events, it is still important resource for today’s life. Thus, the past information is the foundation and can help to make today’s decision.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230024213075 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.133171912833 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.121065375303 0.0946595960268 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0314769975787 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0314769975787 0.0437548338989 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130750605327 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0266343825666 0.0403226058552 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91988950569 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0217917675545 0.0326793684256 67% => OK
Particles: 0.00484261501211 0.00163938923432 295% => OK
Determiners: 0.108958837772 0.0861772015684 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0217917675545 0.021408717616 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00726392251816 0.011925033212 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2227.0 1933.35771543 115% => OK
No of words: 366.0 316.048096192 116% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08469945355 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387978142077 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303278688525 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207650273224 0.203846283523 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155737704918 0.137316102897 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91988950569 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513661202186 0.56093040696 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.1976327862 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3333333333 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1135022978 49.517814964 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.722222222 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 50.6612021858 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.97530864198 1.69124875643 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322507709921 0.332605444948 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104786305457 0.102741220458 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0826280152041 0.0668466124924 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533609356281 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164033360271 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125834412981 0.134430193775 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559070852376 0.0742795772207 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.356427048102 0.324371583561 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0593717835252 0.0638462369009 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217697915821 0.228012699653 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417205439949 0.058150111329 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.