Intelligence is the most important component for leadership. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and support it with adequate examples.
Many people think that the intelligence is the most important trait of leadership. Although, to become a successful and effective leader, a person need to have some of leader skill such as charisma, assertiveness, empathy and social skills; I am agree and in favor of this opinion.
In the one hand, the intelligence is a trait of business acumen, political savvy, a deep understanding of social issues, and knowledge. You could learn how to make good decisions, analyze data or deal with client, but the intelligence is a personal characteristic, which belong to the mental and you could not learn from any school. An intelligent leader is a person who has good understanding of what needs to get done, and what is going to change. He or she then will make decision based on his or her feeling, and this is about how to use your head.
In the other hand, a clever man has capabilities to make people want to follow him, which is a characteristic of charisma. This enables to influence to others in situations such as voting for a project he lead, adopting a proposal. In addition, the intelligence looks like an additive to each leadership skill. If empathy skill is understanding of how people feel, the intelligent man will understand better and faster than. It means that man with cognitive intelligence is easy success in business than others without.
In conclusion, a good leader could lack some of any leadership skills but intelligence. And I support to this opinion with the point that success or not depend on how your brain works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...veness, empathy and social skills; I am agree and in favor of this opinion. In the o...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'leads'.
Suggestion: leads
...uations such as voting for a project he lead, adopting a proposal. In addition, the ...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...each leadership skill. If empathy skill is understanding of how people feel, the intelligent man...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23745819398 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.140468227425 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0869565217391 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0133779264214 0.0501214627716 27% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0434782608696 0.0437548338989 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113712374582 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0167224080268 0.0403226058552 41% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.97370084499 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0434782608696 0.0326793684256 133% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107023411371 0.0861772015684 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0167224080268 0.021408717616 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0334448160535 0.011925033212 280% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1542.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7969924812 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315789473684 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221804511278 0.28420135186 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161654135338 0.203846283523 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127819548872 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97370084499 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.037074148 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.7128794103 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4615384615 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3004751148 49.517814964 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.814263465372 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 42.6419895894 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.86440677966 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269951018328 0.332605444948 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0839534040647 0.102741220458 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0399863563948 0.0668466124924 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526098998841 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.106305284736 0.148594505496 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115145878145 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629209582107 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.313475764352 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0677683767444 0.0638462369009 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189909867706 0.228012699653 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317195831119 0.058150111329 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.