College and universities should offer job preparation before students start to work? what do you think?
First job experience has always been one of the most stressful situations in each person's life. As a matter of fact, finding a suitable job is a dream for everybody especially students. I strongly believe that each student should have some practical experiences before entering to a company.
First and foremost, job preparation can help students to save time. Obviously, each person should know how to speak in an official atmosphere or how to make fun with his/her co-workers. These kinds of job preparations can be useful to teach them how to be in these situations. As we all know, people need to learn some tricks or point before going to work. Furthermore, some of the people learn these points in a course before going to work and on the other hand, some of them learn it during their job hardly.
Second, students will be more confidence with having knowledge in his/her future job. Undoubtedly, most students have no idea about a job after school. They need to learn lot of points to be successful in their work. Compare two young adults; one of them has some information about his/her future job and one of them has not. Consequently, the first one with enough data will be more confidence and knowledgeable in the company.
Last but not least, students can find some friends. For instance, my husband used to go to 3D Max classes after his school which was an extra class for being ready to go to a company. He spent two months in that class to learn how to write a program by this application. During this class he met a guy who was really good at this program. When he finished his course, he started to find a job in his major and he found out that guy is a senior manager in Walmart Company. This friendship encouraged him to try harder and he finally got a job in the Walmart by his friend's advices.
To sum up, job preparation is a good opportunity for students who has no experience in job market to be familiar with a new situation.
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Essay evaluation report
students will be more confidence
students will be more confident
flaws:
The second reason can be developed better: about 'confidence'
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 356 350
No. of Characters: 1560 1500
No. of Different Words: 182 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.344 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.382 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.505 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.528 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.527 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.185 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...f the most stressful situations in each persons life. As a matter of fact, finding a su...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...oint before going to work. Furthermore, some of the people learn these points in a course b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... some of them learn it during their job hardly. Second, students will be more conf...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'for instance', 'as a matter of fact', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242894056848 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.144702842377 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0697674418605 0.0866891130778 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0335917312661 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0568475452196 0.0685040099705 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116279069767 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0206718346253 0.0351676179071 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61512830792 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0542635658915 0.0309702414327 175% => OK
Particles: 0.00516795865633 0.00188951952338 274% => OK
Determiners: 0.111111111111 0.0887237588012 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0180878552972 0.0209618222197 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0206718346253 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1964.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 353.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56373937677 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.28328611898 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.203966005666 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14164305949 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0906515580737 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61512830792 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518413597734 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.2655131469 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.65 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.924895543 48.84282405 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 120.699889404 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 38.0466005666 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.61538461538 1.45489161554 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229946397497 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0965645347928 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0967310338103 0.0752933317313 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497981153871 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160073339236 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088145411807 0.114077575197 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511771918262 0.0781384742642 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.253863367337 0.336927656856 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0567925771945 0.067059652881 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152198576063 0.210909579961 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407797681314 0.0618886996521 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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