a nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
The speaker says that a nation require all its student to study the same curriculum up to a certain level i.e. before joining the college. I agree with the speaker . This has a lot of benefits , on the other hand it has certain disadvantage also. By saying the same national curriculum the speaker mean that the students should be taught same subjects with same courseware through out the country.
Firstly, it will help students in overall development of their knowledge. suppose a student is narrowed to a few general subjects only. This will keep their point of view on some general topic very narrow . On the other if the student has wide knowledge of different subjects, the guy has more comprehensive opinion about a particular topic. Take an example , suppose a child has never been taught history , the subject he knows is science only and there is a particular debate on research being done in past, going on and the debators are arguing about the type of conditions that prevail in ancient time & its influence on people (for eg. people were so dominating they don't believe einstein at that time) and comparing it with the todays condition . Then the child doesnot understand the whole thing with much comprehension on the flip side, a child with the knowledge of science and history both can comprehend the situation better.
Secondly, a curriculum covering many subjects will help a student decide his interest . Take the example of this enterpreneur bill gates , he has failed in a lot of subjects in school. Has he not been introduced to the computers ,The world would have never seen such a big tech giant and philantropist ever. So introduction to various subjects help one in finding his interest, otherwise one will always be doing what he never liked.
On the other hand common school curriculum do bad with those who has some interest in stuff other than studies. suppose someone has interest in music . So, he is just wasting his time in studying maths in school as this subject has no relevance to his interest. But still some amount moral lessons should be required in every field which should be taught to everyone commonly.
Hence this common curriculum is like a double edged sword. It is good for those who can find their interest in studies whereas it do little good to those who like stuff other than educational subjects like sports music etc.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'whereas', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246606334842 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.156108597285 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0927601809955 0.0880659088768 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.052036199095 0.0497285424764 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0475113122172 0.0444667217837 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119909502262 0.12292977631 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0475113122172 0.0406280797675 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55816745709 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0180995475113 0.030933414821 59% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.126696832579 0.0997080785238 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0226244343891 0.0249443105267 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0135746606335 0.0148568991511 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2388.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 417.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72661870504 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31654676259 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249400479616 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151079136691 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0887290167866 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55816745709 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 219.290929204 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52757793765 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 59.8861239543 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9545454545 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2786303917 59.4972553346 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.545454545 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9545454545 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.674092028746 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.21349557522 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.8945934162 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.61946902655 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283759428825 0.391690518653 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0855476063557 0.123202303941 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581938554262 0.077325440228 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496076984315 0.547984918172 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164721371072 0.149214159877 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934364858029 0.161403998019 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965491284119 0.0892212321368 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.303459417715 0.385218514788 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0698548202438 0.0692045440612 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160862073457 0.275328986314 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132704786021 0.0653680567796 203% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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