Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are (agree or disagree)
With the advent of technology, advertisements become more and more prevalent. The advertisement is the most effective way of showing products and convincing the customers. Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. However, sometimes customers will be misled by companies exaggerate the functions of the product. As far as I am concerned, advertisements make products seem more appealing than they really are. I base my point of view on the following reasons.
Firstly, advertisements tend to use exaggerate its effect to persuade customers to buy it. In order to get everyone's attention within seconds, the companies have to represent the best side of the products. Nevertheless, the companies tend to overstate the function of the products. The customers only find out the product is deviated to it really does.
Secondly, advertisement companies sometimes focus on special groups such as anti-smoking and dietary supplement products. Someone who wants to quit smoking may be attracted by the anti-smoking products, and the customers will be convinced easily. Also, the dietary supplement advertisement may have old people get healthier after they eat the products, so old people may want to buy them to live healthier.
Thirdly, some products may have idols or celebrities as the representative on the advertisement. Some people buy the products because they admire the idols rather than the products itself.
All in all, for the reason that I mention above, companies tend to male their products seem more appealing to make profits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have old people get healthier after they eat the products, so old people may want...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227758007117 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.192170818505 0.158761421928 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.067615658363 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0640569395018 0.046263068375 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498220640569 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0925266903915 0.118717715034 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0320284697509 0.0351676179071 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.13058813579 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0427046263345 0.0309702414327 138% => OK
Particles: 0.00355871886121 0.00188951952338 188% => OK
Determiners: 0.103202846975 0.0887237588012 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0213523131673 0.0209618222197 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00355871886121 0.0139019557991 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1584.0 2387.08602151 66% => OK
No of words: 248.0 408.028673835 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38709677419 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.48200974243 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391129032258 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322580645161 0.251872472559 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.270161290323 0.174417080927 155% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.201612903226 0.112833075102 179% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13058813579 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 50.9096359601 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4941031175 48.84282405 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 47.7580645161 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.1511627907 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195743983265 0.300154397459 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118618466055 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103637513429 0.0752933317313 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.605437638623 0.497263757937 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173527317762 0.151897553556 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111669753722 0.114077575197 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196635778837 0.0781384742642 252% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.286850818962 0.336927656856 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0924483669602 0.067059652881 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125007545925 0.210909579961 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100654893472 0.0618886996521 163% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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