Do you agree or disagree:
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Human beings' life is full of different choices which determine the way of living. Making decision in such a crucially important situation that will be affected the whole life. Personally, I believe that, significant decisions should not be made alone. There are three main reason to show why I have this preference.
To begin with, every person has experience in limited affairs of life. Depending on the working situations or the people whom have faced or even the challenges which have had, people have experience in their lives. Therefore, in making some important decisions, a person should use the experiences of other people who can help him/her. The first choice undoubtedly are family members who always help us to make the best decisions and in the second level there are professional counsellor that can help us according their experiences and also their knowledge. My own experience is a good example of this. About four years ago when I wanted to get marriage, I was not sure in my decision if I made a right one or not. Although my family was for my decision, I speak to a counsellor to give me some advice and it was so useful to convince myself that I had made the best decision.
Furthermore, in each situation, we cannot consider all aspects. In other word, in order to making a great decision we must pay comprehensive attention to the issue and it would not be possible without using other people's opinion. As I said above, in marriages' decision I considered emotional aspect more than others whereas family and monetary affairs were important for my family more than other things, in addition, when I spoke to the counsellor, he informed me about many other aspects of a great marriage such as behavioral an mutual understanding or our attitude toward life. Therefore, by regarding all of these issues I could make the best decision in my life that was my marriage to my lovely husband.
To sum up, a significant decision never should be made alone. Regarding other peoples' experiences and paying attention to all aspects of decision would help us to make better decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
Human beings life is full of different choices which...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'counsellors'?
Suggestion: counsellors
...the second level there are professional counsellor that can help us according their experi...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to accord' or 'accord'.
Suggestion: to accord; accord
...rofessional counsellor that can help us according their experiences and also their knowle...
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Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... of a great marriage such as behavioral an mutual understanding or our attitude to...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'as for', 'in addition', 'such as', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203045685279 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.157360406091 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109137055838 0.0866891130778 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0507614213198 0.046263068375 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0862944162437 0.0685040099705 126% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0939086294416 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0406091370558 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75354635335 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355329949239 0.0309702414327 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00253807106599 0.00188951952338 134% => OK
Determiners: 0.0812182741117 0.0887237588012 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0279187817259 0.0209618222197 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0279187817259 0.0139019557991 201% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2101.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 359.0 408.028673835 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85236768802 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342618384401 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239554317549 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194986072423 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136490250696 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75354635335 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537604456825 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 58.6638287523 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1176470588 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0123940751 48.84282405 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.588235294 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.644075263715 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 45.0730788137 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.14655172414 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135192803441 0.300154397459 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0873738064922 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0692177495829 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.463000553894 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146045845527 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552119490387 0.114077575197 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520323622056 0.0781384742642 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315462416881 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0589674440646 0.067059652881 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103419940851 0.210909579961 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350026763255 0.0618886996521 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.