"It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public."
According to the speaker abandoning to inform people about political information is a beneficial attitude. I personally agree that this form of tendency would be lucrative owing to the fact some information are considered by the governor as security data related to the nation interest. Moreover some information, including criminal documents might lead to creating chaos society. Otherwise, people require to be informed by the nation data since they think that they live in democratic and egalitarian society.
Political leaders should avoid to assert anything without considering the interest of the nation, and it would be better to limit themselves of showing these information than to speak about it freely without any obligation. The interest of the nation sometimes is threatened by some political leaders when they speak about the economic plans derived confidant. For example, if some political managers want to speak about their decision correlated to the watershed company, some international company considering only their interest will invest their budgetary in this location. In fact, this investment might lead to prevent local people to invest on it owing to not being as competitive as international company. To illustrate more, the more political leaders consider when and how to speak to the public, the better can be lucrative for their people. Hardly ever can we see nation who is successful in the people's point of view unless its political leader like its governor can manage the scope of the information.
The scope of the information and type of it can also be considered by the government security ones. And we all know that security information is the most significant kind of the information among all the countries. Indeed, this information includes strategic plans and diplomacy strategy, and so forth. Such information should be preserved by the political leads as well as possible without any risking in any aspects and in any details. What distinguishes this information to other ones is assigned by the Mr. President and his court. Therefore, political leader should not speak about it freely unless they console it by these persons, including president. For instance, in recent decade ago, country of England loose its position in the European country since its political leaders had talked about their decision about departing from some countries to improve their economics. Consider such an important aspect of information, especially security aspect, brings attention of the leaders not to speak freely. Aside from the provisos reasons aforementioned above, however, democratic government requires to show its trustworthy and clearness by informing people about its information and decision. People might not trust to government who wants to conceal anything in any aspect of information and scope. In fact, according to the law written by each country, governor must show its information by its leaders. If my memory serves me right, in U.S.A in one age, one president called Richard had abandoned to inform people about economic issue. This abandoning causes to resign during his manager. Thus, some information should be informed by leaders.
In sum, unless this information would be security, and leads to threaten the interest of the nation, other information should be asserted by political leaders owing to the fact that people want to live in a democratic type of the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ty data related to the nation interest. Moreover some information, including criminal do...
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Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid asserting'.
Suggestion: avoid asserting
...rian society. Political leaders should avoid to assert anything without considering the intere...
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Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...e better to limit themselves of showing these information than to speak about it freely without a...
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Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
... obligation. The interest of the nation sometimes is threatened by some political leaders wh...
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Line 3, column 714, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...n recent decade ago, country of England loose its position in the European country si...
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Line 3, column 1106, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'showing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: showing
...however, democratic government requires to show its trustworthy and clearness by inform...
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Line 3, column 1450, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...s. If my memory serves me right, in U.S.A in one age, one president called Richar...
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Line 3, column 1450, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...s. If my memory serves me right, in U.S.A in one age, one president called Richar...
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Line 3, column 1569, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'resigning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: resigning
... economic issue. This abandoning causes to resign during his manager. Thus, some informat...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238175675676 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.158783783784 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0675675675676 0.0880659088768 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0489864864865 0.0497285424764 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0540540540541 0.0444667217837 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131756756757 0.12292977631 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0557432432432 0.0406280797675 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86396258094 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0489864864865 0.030933414821 158% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0996621621622 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0287162162162 0.0249443105267 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0101351351351 0.0148568991511 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3428.0 2732.02544248 125% => OK
No of words: 541.0 452.878318584 119% => OK
Chars per words: 6.33641404806 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.417744916821 0.366273622748 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.325323475046 0.280924506359 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.260628465804 0.200843997647 130% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173752310536 0.132149295362 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86396258094 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 219.290929204 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449168207024 0.48968727796 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.57071336 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.64 23.380412469 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9779791508 59.4972553346 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.12 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.64 23.380412469 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.674092028746 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 54.1723475046 51.4728631049 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.62580645161 1.64882698954 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277580784017 0.391690518653 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109535484206 0.123202303941 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0791574866382 0.077325440228 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466792594253 0.547984918172 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171930358986 0.149214159877 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114211415812 0.161403998019 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555498781827 0.0892212321368 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.560704269438 0.385218514788 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0295398528964 0.0692045440612 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21856146969 0.275328986314 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344020903708 0.0653680567796 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.