All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage the students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems.
The speaker says that all nation should support the development of a global university to engage the students in solving the most persistent social problems prevailing today in the world. I agree with this thought of the speaker as the implication of this thought will help in overcoming the grim situation different parts of world is facing today. It helps not only in overcoming the problems but also gives a better world to live in.
Firstly, an institution of this kind will bring various prospects of people living in different parts of world, on the problem. They will get their culture , tradition and their knowledge with them which not only helps in rooting out the problem but also gives a wider view of consequences a problem can have. Take the example of global crisis of drinking water the world is facing. When this problem is looked upon in this university, individual from different countries will give their view on saving, recycling and reducing the waste of water and how they can be avoided. This will give a comprehensive solution to this problem and helps in proper circulation of drinking water in the parts of world as per the need.
Secondly, this university will make the solution of a global problem more easy and helps in overcoming the shortcomings of the solution. Suppose we propose a solution to a problem , being in one country it may happen the solution is specific for this country only and it has a lot of shortcomings when it is used in other countries. But when you have people from different countries each one will give their situation and we will be able to propose a more error free solution to a problem which can be used globally.
Praising about the fact that this university will help a lot in eradicating the global problems, I would also say that it has some disadvantages also. It will bring a lot of disagreement while solving a problem as every country has its own issues. Moreover , this will make the solution finding more tough as finding a solution for a small region problem is easy compared to a issue discussed at a global level. But still it will prove advantageous the world if it functioned properly.
Therefore, a global university will definitely helps in defeating the present problems not only comprehensively but also the solution would work for a longer time. The university of this kind will get yes a better life ahead with no issues. Yes it is tough to get a solution for a global problem but once it is worked upon, nothing is impossible
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216738197425 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.160944206009 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0772532188841 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0536480686695 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.049356223176 0.0444667217837 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12660944206 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0536480686695 0.0406280797675 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69791149902 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0171673819742 0.030933414821 55% => OK
Particles: 0.00214592274678 0.0016655270985 129% => OK
Determiners: 0.145922746781 0.0997080785238 146% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0450643776824 0.0249443105267 181% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0128755364807 0.0148568991511 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2515.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 441.0 452.878318584 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7029478458 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30612244898 0.366273622748 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242630385488 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163265306122 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.132149295362 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69791149902 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424036281179 0.48968727796 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.193532306 55.4138127331 83% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5 23.380412469 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3467461983 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.722222222 141.124799967 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 23.380412469 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.674092028746 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 48.7630385488 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.50406504065 1.64882698954 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475417289164 0.391690518653 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.14129991176 0.123202303941 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0985336955485 0.077325440228 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.593443842728 0.547984918172 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.101764751252 0.149214159877 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219871765237 0.161403998019 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168853919289 0.0892212321368 189% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.444857910229 0.385218514788 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0449419093689 0.0692045440612 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33610800684 0.275328986314 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169264144531 0.0653680567796 259% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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