Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some traditional folks argue that natives are to welcome visitors of their country and aware about the differences that they carry. Others disagree with this thought because they believe that guess from others countries are to follow their local cultures, and change their behavior like native residents.
First of all, the thing that should change when people visit other countries is language. Every country in this world owns their modern language. Therefore, tourists should know language of their destination country to build good new citizens that they meet. Without knowing the language, they could not socialize and would not realize about the circumstances in their destination states. Myriad workers from Indonesia suffer in their company because they could not communicate well with their colleagues who are native people. However, others believe that they should maintain their mother language although they live abroad. They might speak in foreign language when they argue with their partners who are natives and speak with their own language when they arrive at their home and talk with family.
Physically, kinds of food in different countries are unequal because they have their own resources of agriculture. The main source of carbohydrate in Indonesia is rice whilst in western countries is wheat. Students from Indonesia who study in Europe should deal with bread when they need to consume carbohydrate, yet they would suffer because hunger. They might face difficulties if they endure to find rice. Moreover, the main ingredients of Indonesian cuisine could not be found in certain countries, so they do not have any chance to cook traditional food. Nevertheless, in certain place in Europe tourists could find local from Indonesia easily because there are several restaurant that provides Indonesian cuisine. Thus, they could taste they cuisine without returning to Indonesia.
To sum up, even though pilgrims should pursue the culture of their country destination, they could utilize every option which is given by native to apply their own culture.
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Sentence: Others disagree with this thought because they believe that guess from others countries are to follow their local cultures, and change their behavior like native residents.
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Sentence: Thus, they could taste they cuisine without returning to Indonesia.
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Sentence: The main source of carbohydrate in Indonesia is rice whilst in western countries is wheat.
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