Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The speaker claims that the solution of today’s problems dos not relies on the laws and the legal system. To justify this claim, the speaker reasons that opinions and feelings of a person can not change by the laws. There are some countries like England even though some rights do not stand by laws; however, they are accepted from majority. On the other hand, some countries have strict legislation that the rights and the responsibilities are clearly determined. I partially agree with the statement that laws are not effective on changing the minds of a people;however, we can not say that they are not a solution in many case. The claim needs more specification on the type of the solutions.
First of all, the ideas or the feelings are the source of the actions. Laws can restrict the actions, or differentiate right and wrong. Even though the action is punished by the laws, some can not prohibit its happening without erasing it source. Especially, last decade stands on a great example about this issue. Most of the western civilizations gave the same gender marriage rights to their citizens. Most of them also has protective laws against discrimination. Nevertheless, the LGBT community still faces with great discrimination from the early ages to their adult life. For example, the suicide rates among homosexual teens are increasing. Most of the cases shows that the reason is the hate came from their schoolmates. These are clear evidences that people still can not erase homophobia in their minds , although the country gave many rights and protection to the homosexual people.
Besides homophobia, racism is still a vital problem in 2016. Even after decades from equality of colors, racial discrimination is unfortunately alive and strong. In particular, Black Lives Matter movement in USA has brought many controversial issues along. Especially social media is the full of the racist accounts that can share anything behind anonymity mask. This also raises a question that, if the social media has some legislation to overcome this issues, would the people continue to write racist comments? This question also raises further ones like should some ideas be forbidden? It may be beneficial for a short period, but after some time people will find different platform to speak about their minds.
Finally, the roles of the laws can not be underestimated because thanks to them the crimes can be differentiate from the right actions. Perhaps, they symbolize the difference of right and wrong. Moreover, they can be play a dissuasive role for criminal candidates. If they contain strong punishments, people might dissuade from their actions. However, it again only stops the action. On the contrary, to solve a problem, some has to erase the problem itself.
In conclusion, although the laws are important to stop taking action, most of the time they are not effective on exterminate of the problems.
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- Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reas 54
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 626, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun case seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cases'.
Suggestion: many cases
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sources'?
Suggestion: sources
...ohibit its happening without erasing it source. Especially, last decade stands on a gr...
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Line 3, column 814, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... can not erase homophobia in their minds , although the country gave many rights a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, as to, for example, in conclusion, in particular, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2450.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12552301255 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8024089826 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52510460251 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0951658101 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23333333333 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149629478974 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394107488864 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049661590299 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852167736634 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544616608723 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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