People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A man who has never gone to school may steal a freight car but if he has a university education, he may steal the whole railroad. University is a place to learn new things and enhance the capability of your mind which would take you to new discoveries and a better life for yourself. What's more, many attend college for gaining knowledge, career preparation and new experience. Besides that, I also believe people may attend college or university for many other reasons like inventions, knowing and meeting new people, and promotion in company.
First and foremost, I do believe some have special interest in a specific area to invent something new and be the reason of a change. what's more, especially our today's young generation have a great motivation and eagerness to discover new things and work on their research plans for new things in this world where even today many things are still hidden. I elaborate this by giving the example of, space science where still scientists are searching and trying to know more things about the universe that's because, the universe which has no limits many things around as are still unknown and especially where it did come from. As a result, it motivates many young students and scholars to attend college for learning and doing on research.
Additionally, some others may attend university to get promotion in office and to increase their salary in the company where they work. After all, college is the only place to get more knowledge and show you are more capable of doing something. For instance, an employee who is working in a office where he earn less salary and having a low position but meanwhile, he decide to attend college for higher studies to get a high position in the office and besides that will be paid more. Essentially, it will change his life in a positive direction.
To put in brief, Every person has a different opinion of going to school and university and diversity of ideas would take them to a university and college life. After all, it's the only place of enhancing your skill for a better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
...romotion in office and to increase their salary in the company where they work. A...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'earns'.
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
...having a low position but meanwhile, he decide to attend college for higher studies to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, still, while, after all, for instance, in brief, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86388888889 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64048343638 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0350662836 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.071428571 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351019613237 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125336836273 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813716587691 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210555667152 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744439335827 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.