You are staying in rented accommodation. You recently held a party to celebrate your birthday. Several neighbours have complained about the noise to your landlord.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:
apologize for the disturbance
explain the situation
say how you will remedy the situation
Dear John,
I am writing to apologize from you about the party that it is held on 27th November. I already know, my neighbors are complained to you about some noises in your own house area.
Actually, it is a big party which was arranged my family for me. They are invited to the 40 people to celebrate my party. Therefore in my house are so many crowded and also we arrange events for children and adults such as musical chair game and so on. Furthermore, after the event, we arrange DJ music for adults to enjoy the night. Unfortunately, the party was ended after the midnight.
Finally, I really upset for this situation because you have to face any trouble from my neighbors. Therefore I decided to get apologize from all my neighbors as personally.
Once again I would like to say sorry and I promise you I will never arrange the night party at your place
Thanks
Yours sincerely
mohan
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Essay evaluation report
my neighbors are complained to you
my neighbors complained to you
which was arranged my family for me
which was arranged by my family for me
They are invited to the 40 people to celebrate
They invited 40 people to celebrate
Therefore in my house are so many crowded
Therefore my house is so crowded
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
You don't use passive voice correctly. Read a grammar book.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 162 350
No. of Characters: 708 1500
No. of Different Words: 101 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.568 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.37 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.383 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 40 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.727 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.817 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.38 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.685 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.203 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...to the 40 people to celebrate my party. Therefore in my house are so many crowded and als...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... to face any trouble from my neighbors. Therefore I decided to get apologize from all my ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er arrange the night party at your place Thanks Yours sincerely mohan
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, furthermore, really, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61728395062 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48991258587 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7346353861 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229719765942 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854189729506 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787022568308 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142260098907 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933735009419 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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