In some countries, more and more adults choose to continue to live with their parents after they graduate and have found jobs. Do the advantages of this trend is outweigh its disadvantages?
In recent years, there is a tendency that after graduating and getting jobs, adults live with their parents continuously. From my point of view, this trend in some countries has extreme obstructions compared to its benefits.
It is obvious that living with parents has some certain benefits. For instance, both parents and their children will save living expenses significantly, which decreases financial pressures for both. Therefore, they will have the advantages to invest in other future plans.
However, its drawbacks are more considerable to its benefits. First and foremost, while people w...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-05-31 | aria etemadi | 89 | view |
- If people go to live in a new country, they should follow local customs and traditions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- To improve their appearances, many people spend money a lot of money on products like clothing, haircut, and beauty products. Some people think it is a good way to spend money; other people believe that there are better ways to spend money. Discuss both v 79
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor bike To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- Some people think that only the best students should be rewarded Others however it is more important to reward student who show improvements Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- We should encourage young people to visit different countries as it could bring many benefits to them Do you agree or disagree 86
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46785714286 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7074137633 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.767178874 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.769230769 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350275141221 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133740633408 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726891224093 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236637148615 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630265093973 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.