You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this.
• Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain
• Why you are writing to them
• Why you think the insurance should not be increased
• What you want them to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to complain about the increasing in the insurance premium for my car starting from the next month.
If your esteemed company raised the insurance premium, this would result in a 20% in the amount I paid every month.
So, kindly be informed that I have been with you esteemed company for more than five years as a golden client. During this period, I have never made a claim on my insurance. Accordingly, as the current conditions of the financial market and cars marker, this is a large rate.
I would therefore like you to arrange an urgent meeting with you and your respectful team in order to provide me with an
explanation for such a raise and to look for a solution to obviate the rising of the insurance premium for my car.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Paula
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tful team in order to provide me with an explanation for such a raise and to look...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61437908497 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49644114242 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6596710413 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430039077835 0.216113520407 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161738674179 0.0766984524023 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804453159142 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194938232532 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751299272617 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.