People today move to new cities or new countries more than ever before. What challenges do they experience? What strategies are there to meet challenges?
Nowadays, people are more mobile than in the past and their preferences reveal the alterations in lifestyle. Hence, it is not surprising that they often relocate to new cities or new countries. However, there might be some challenges they have to overcome such as concerns with a job, making new friends, loneliness, accommodation and so on.
One of the major problems moving to new countries would be finding a job. In this case, the most helpful strategy is to prepare in advance. For example, before setting off to move, it is suggested acquainting with some local citizens in order to be aware with the job circumstances.
Second paramount question to be answered is the anxious with language. Before starting to move, it is vitally important to learn the language related to the country you are intending to relocate. This would definitely liberate us from concerns about getting lost as well as making new local friends.
Another issues might emerge in the new destination, including, loneliness and accommodation. There are certain organizations to support newcomers such as overseas migration’s associations, sport or hobby clubs where it is feasible to make new friends. As a result, migrants would certainly forget the homesickness and stress that come up owing to the aloneness.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that migrating to new areas confronts people to diverse obstacles. Therefore, it would be useful to prepare in advance as much as possible before starting to move.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18595041322 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01466318391 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611570247934 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6122030481 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.6428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227110342729 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736824411379 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595937880799 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119134051933 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714093964006 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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