Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Every country has its own cultural traditions, a very important heritage for each of its people who has responsibility to treasure. For a city, culture is its spirit, and traditional culture makes it distinctive from others——a signature of city's identity with glorious history, unique culture, awaking people to reminiscence, thought, exclamation, and inheritance, transmitting from one generation to another. For this reason, traditional culture, a kind of ancient, powerful, profound message, is highly valued in modern times, either government or public, a strong impetus to the regeneration and prosperity of a city.
Accompanied with the evolution of its culture, a city forms, develops, and expands, with its geographical landscape, customs, beliefs, recounting people its story vividly. St. Peter's Basilica in Rome is a typical Baroque architecture, the entire interior of which is richly ornamented with marble, reliefs, architectural sculpture and gilding, symbols of the sublime of the beautiful and mystery, and with majestic and magnificent exterior; Milan Cathedral in Italy is a representative Gothic architecture, decorated with pillars, flamboyant glass, flying buttress, and pointed arch, signifying an upward momentum and the spirit of Milan——all of them are the precious heritage of their country, worthy of people to visit, learn, research. But cultural traditions of a country have generated from all around the country, not just in major cities, but in rural areas, together with medium-small cities and towns, especially in the low urbanization of a country, in which the valuable culture traditions are necessary to be preserved.
Obviously, culture traditions have been playing an important role in the development and prosperity of major cities. Traditional culture of a city acts as a business card, such as Fashion City(Paris, France), Music City(Vienna Austria), Film Festival City(Cannes France), Porcelain Town(Jingdezhen, China), attracting millions of people from home and abroad to travel and engaged in business activity, creating economic benefits and promoting economic booming for these cities. Moreover, public places of traditional culture like natural museum, history museum, tea ceremony, floriculture, painting and calligraphy, offers people good relaxation and learning, and extremely enriches public life. On the one hand, some traditional culture like traditional Chinese painting and calligraphy has been incorporating residents' daily life and study——a kind of inheritance without governmental finance support but its encouragement and advocacy. On the other hand, some traditional culture like various museums requires funding either from government or other channels. In short, with the support of governmental policy and fund, traditional culture in major cities will become more and more prosperous, accordingly these cities' economy will be thriving.
Globalization requires traditional culture in a city to innovate in order to adapt to the change. Major cities in a country are always a big melting pot, in which people come from different areas at home and abroad with various cultural backgrounds, facing cultural conflicts to force these cities' culture to change to meet their needs. Often, diet culture is the characteristic. In major cities, there are a lot of varied restaurants supplying plentiful foods for people with different dietary habits. Lingua Franca usually substitutes local language, convenient for people to communicate. faced with this change, government should make to some degree adjustment both to preserve traditional culture but to gear to new requirements. Most importantly, innovation is very crucial for traditional culture in modern times. For instance, Errenzhuan, produced in rural areas of Northeast China, is rooted in such urban areas as Changchun, Shenyang, Harbin, now having been added with different elements from home and abroad and so disseminating the country and the world, which have not only handed down this traditional culture, but have increased cities' prosperity and public welfare.
In conclusion, national traditional culture generates and remains alive in all over the country, and with the support of the governments will continue to exert its power to contribute to the sustainability and prosperity of major cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1207, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
... and more prosperous, accordingly these cities economy will be thriving. Globaliza...
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Line 8, column 592, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Faced
..., convenient for people to communicate. faced with this change, government should mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in short, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 97.0 58.6224719101 165% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3704.0 2235.4752809 166% => OK
No of words: 640.0 442.535393258 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7875 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02973371873 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11848696286 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 334.0 215.323595506 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521875 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 1170.0 704.065955056 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.629035538 60.3974514979 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.380952381 118.986275619 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4761904762 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230695063068 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833461409017 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557559838836 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141772600491 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403953483007 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 48.8420337079 49% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 12.1743820225 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.1639044944 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 215.0 100.480337079 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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