Inhabitants of the coastal regions nearest to Oceania are known to have lived on a diet of fish and mammals. The discovery of piles of preserved fish bones at the archaeological sites on Oceania suggests that the settlers of Oceania must have hunted and eaten the mammals also.
The statement providing the fact that piles of preserved fish bones at the archaeological sites on Oceania but the inference that settlers of Oceania must have hunted and eaten the mammals provides glitches. There are no facts or any proof that Oceania settlers also hunted mammals and fishes. First of all just because there was a pile of preserved fish bones found at the archaelogical sites the conclusion that people survived on diet of fishes and mammals. The piles of preserved fish bones could be a result of an epadamic that might have hit the aqua life near that region.Also it might be equally possible that fishes were killed not only for eating but for various other purposes like fish oil or medicine uses. Now assuming the above fact to be unquestionable, there is no reference about mammals and drawing conclsuions without any stated facts that mammals were also eaten and hunted is quite absurd. Hence we can easily say that it is not neccesary that Inhabitants of the coastal regions nearest to Oceania are known to have lived on a diet of fish and mammals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 580, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...have hit the aqua life near that region.Also it might be equally possible that fishe...
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Line 1, column 580, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...have hit the aqua life near that region.Also it might be equally possible that fishe...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... also eaten and hunted is quite absurd. Hence we can easily say that it is not necces...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 55.5748502994 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 2260.96107784 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 441.139720559 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77956989247 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.56307096286 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53148174297 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 204.123752495 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55376344086 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 705.55239521 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.8473053892 136% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3749834261 57.8364921388 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.166666667 119.503703932 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 23.324526521 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.70786347227 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.51147753677 0.218282227539 234% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256157337693 0.0743258471296 345% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165297442272 0.0701772020484 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.51147753677 0.128457276422 398% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.3799401198 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 98.500998004 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.1389221557 129% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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