Some people say that a person's success depends on his or upbringing by parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
It is universally accepted that parentds play a paramount role in everyone's life. Presently , it is rely on his or her nurture by guidance. Here, i would like to accord with the given statement.
Multifarios points can be put down to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, parents provide a great deal of knowledge. To justify, they inculcate in their children,s mind many moral values such as ethics, good ettiquates and so on which will help offsprings to become successful. Apart from it, they teach their kids various skills. To elaborate, children can learn how to deal with people, communicate in a positive manner and good behave with others while teaching by parents. As a result, they are expected to become good businessman and get success.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. children are sent in school by parents to get success. To give a specific example, they learn many academic subject and participate in school,s competition that provide creativity and education. Thence, as it is said that "Education sets the pillar of success". On contrary, others have conflicting views.
They think that a person success depends on talent. For instance, masses have talent of different fields as dancing, sports and singing, they can show their talent at national or international levels. consequently, they could not only achieve targets but also they could earn name and fame.
To recapitualate, undeniable, some people ponder that talent is worthwhile to get success. However, i still belive that parents are much significant to make a person get breakthrough.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, still, then, while, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19615384615 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87344571918 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642307692308 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0482952008 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1052631579 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6842105263 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126553811179 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039864972495 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423155619702 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709556807245 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212088764194 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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