The graph below shows the monthly profits of 3 British companies in the car retail industry for the 2000 financial year. write a report for a university lecturer comparing the performance of acme sports car. and Branson motors for the period given
The given line graph compares monthly profits of given three British companies namely acme sports, Curtis car and Branson motors in 3 quarters for 2000 financial year.
As observed from the graph that acme sports car had highest profit approximately $75 and the graph rose significantly in end of 1st quarter and reached $80. But figure dramatically down in end of 2nd quarter. It was only profit $15. We can see from graph remained stable in 3rd quarter and financial year. Branson motors started there profit in $20 and that figure significantly ride in 1st quarter and doubled profit in end of 1st quarter. In the 2nd quarter, the graph drastically rise and reached almost $60. After that it had some zing-zag trend in 3rd quarter. It remained their level at $60 end of financial year.
On the other hand, Curtis car mart had good profit $40 in starting an that level drastically rose by $40 profit in 2nd quarter. but it was excellent performance in 3rd and financial year. Curtis car mart topped in financial year. it was nearly $80 profit.
To sum up, in car retail industry most people prefer to buy sports cars between April to June month. After that tax was apply on luxury goods. so people changed their mind and they buy Branson motors and Curtis car industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
...ved from the graph that acme sports car had highest profit approximately 5 and the graph ro...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... drastically rise and reached almost 0. After that it had some zing-zag trend in 3rd ...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'end' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'ends'.
Suggestion: ends
...d quarter. It remained their level at 0 end of financial year. On the other hand...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... car mart had good profit 0 in starting an that level drastically rose by 0 profit...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: AN_THEN[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'and that'?
Suggestion: and that
... car mart had good profit 0 in starting an that level drastically rose by 0 profit in 2...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ically rose by 0 profit in 2nd quarter. but it was excellent performance in 3rd and...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rtis car mart topped in financial year. it was nearly 0 profit. To sum up, in c...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ports cars between April to June month. After that tax was apply on luxury goods. so ...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'applied'.
Suggestion: applied
...April to June month. After that tax was apply on luxury goods. so people changed thei...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ter that tax was apply on luxury goods. so people changed their mind and they buy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68161434978 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47915154087 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497757847534 0.547539520022 91% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 43.6115219151 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.25 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9375 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334804106998 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106706326098 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117156536197 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246422478837 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14946125367 0.0819641961636 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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