You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether go to college or try to get a job. you think he/she should get a job.
Dear Jason,
It has been long time since we did not see each other. I hope that you are doing well in this period. I am writing in response to your letter requesting advice about whether you should apply for a job or go to college.
I strongly recommend that you should directly seek a job. First of all, the education in college merely emphasizes on conceptual knowledge or theory that is tedious and has almost no implication for future employment. Furthermore, tertiary education costs are prohibitively expensive and unaffordable to you, which also imposes a burden on you; given your finical circumstance, you ought to make attempts to find a decent job.
At workplace, you have a great opportunity to acquire factual knowledge that is important and useful in real world. In addition, getting a lucrative job can also enable you to effectively mitigate your financial pressure and earn a living, thereby having a comfortable social life.
When it comes to the types of occupation, I suggest that you should apply for a position at an IT company, as you have an impressive proficiency in programming. Moreover, IT industries have enormous potential to develop and you will amass a huge fortune from it.
I hope that these suggestions will be of some assistance. I look forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards,
David Villa.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
It has been long time
It has been a long time
and useful in real world.
and useful in the real world.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 225 250
No. of Characters: 1073 1200
No. of Different Words: 148 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.873 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.769 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.825 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.308 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.624 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.358 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.358 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.216 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jason, It has been long time since we did not s...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ould apply for a job or go to college. I strongly recommend that you should dire...
^
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...that you should apply for a position at an IT company, as you have an impressive prof...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ou should apply for a position at an IT company, as you have an impressive proficiency ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94666666667 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90822248542 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9043985313 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6153846154 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348013605371 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110094039169 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963338191706 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174658397539 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636157928908 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.