Leisure time in a typical week in hour by sex and employment status, 1998-99

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Leisure time in a typical week in hour by sex and employment status, 1998-99

The bar chart illustrates the amount of spare time that was spent for leisure activities per week by people, divided by gender, from various employment sectors between 1998 and 1999 period.
Interestingly, total time spent for relaxation by both genders in unemployed and retired sections were the highest among the other sections. It occupied around 85 and 75 hours by men and women respectively. Whereas, only around half of this figure engaged with spare time in employment (full time) section with well over 45 hours by men and just under 40 hours by women.
It is noticed that in the group of part-time employed and housewives, the amount of leisure time for the men was not mentioned, while the women spend about 40 hours and approximately 50 hours respectively.
In conclusion, women enjoyed less leisure time than men as they have more involvement in household works, childrearing etc. Furthermore, people without jobs had almost double leisure times than the employed population.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e engaged with spare time in employment full time section with well over 45 hours by men ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, well, whereas, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16149068323 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78637721742 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639751552795 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4384604853 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.714285714 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299150591167 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134922006276 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667233944882 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185311684371 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030129693114 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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