People believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?
In the recent time, studying is considered the most important factor lead to success in life. As a result, people think that the process of studying should be started as soon as possible, instead of letting their children have free time for playing all the childhood. Is it the right opinion?
No one can deny that knowledge takes an important role in modern society. The more people study, the better foundation is prepared for this competitive future. Therefore, mothers and fathers have the tendency to have their children study as much as possible. Besides, most parents would rather let their beloved ones safely educated in schools, than playing outside, facing with many dangerous factors. They do believe in teachers, who were well-trained to provide best things to the development of their dearest ones.
However, lots of school work may cause stress to young people which is obviously not good for a child weak mental health. Then, it is necessary that the time for school work and playing should be relatively equal. In addition, physical should have the same weight as mental training for a person to fully grow. In the other hand, proper studying orientations are required due to the fact that not every child has the same interest as well as he or she is only good at some certain subjects.
In conclusion, children need to balance the amount of playing and studying time, for not only on mental but also physical training, and under well-orientations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...e in teachers, who were well-trained to provide best things to the development of their dear...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s only good at some certain subjects. In conclusion, children need to balance th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96761133603 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59139674334 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627530364372 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8891182153 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275827743021 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858778801045 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084538626796 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157136101592 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606369911043 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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