Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think crime is as result of bad person's nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the modern world, a surge in crime rate indicates that our society seems to be losing its moral compass. However, some people argue that crime is attributable to social issues and poverty while others believe crime is a consequence of innate characteristics. The following paragraphs will discuss both views and my own perception.
It is reasonable to believe social issues and poverty are arguably the main causes of crime. First of all, people affected by poverty are likely to commit crimes as those people are even incapable of making ends meet and they are also in desperate need of necessities to survive; as a consequence, they might develop a tendency to commit burglary or robbery. In addition, social problems such as inequality could also lead to an increase in crime rate; for instance, in some countries, lower-class citizens or people from disadvantaged background are treated unfairly or even excluded by governments, which could initially whip them into a frenzy and finally culminate in a series of their anti-social actions, including arson and vandalism.
On the other hand, crime may also result from negative personal nature. In the first place, some psychological scientists have established that aggressive individuals have higher possibility of becoming a criminal in the future in comparison with kind people, since aggressive people are more likely to be violent towards others and have a tendency to commit murder and rape; Furthermore, bad characteristics such as greed could also breed future offenders, as greedy people are normally prone to the temptation of money; therefore, there is higher likelihood that they will be involved in variety of financial crimes such as fraud or bribery.
In my opinion, crime is attributed to a wide range of factors including social problems, poverty, and a person’s innate characteristics. However, it is our obligation to be a law-abiding citizen to maintain the moral compass of our society.
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some psychological scientists have established that
Description: 'establish' is a transitive verb
for example:
She established a reputation as a hard worker.
The word is now established as part of the English language.
The company has established itself as a leader in the industry.
As a young doctor he worked hard to establish himself in the community.
They want to establish their children in the family business.
She established a system of tracking expenses more accurately.
The two countries established a mutual trade agreement.
establishing a link between diet and cancer
Investigators are trying to establish if anyone knew about these problems before the accident.
flaws:
Need to remove semicolons.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 314 350
No. of Characters: 1614 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.21 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.14 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.909 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.545 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.619 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.589 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.053 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 743, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...actions, including arson and vandalism. On the other hand, crime may also result...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29936305732 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0393313395 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.041789275 49.4020404114 316% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.4 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.8 7.06120827912 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341802669922 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137837540003 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865438087241 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188768684183 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524711904041 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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