Do you think the consumer should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Today, almost all products come with attractive and over-packed cover so that they can attract more consumers. As per my view, I think it is the resposibility of consumer to check a real value of product before buying such items. In this essay I will discuss my view on it.
Firstly, today almost all consumers are educated and have knowledge of products and its ingridients. Therefore, even if product is over packed, they can ask seller to show the contents of product and this way we can identify any fault. For example, in many countries there are strict rules for packaging and contents that should be displayed on the package. So, if some menufactures do not follow this guideline then consumer has to report it to relevant department for strict actions.If consumer is taking resposibilty then menufactures can stop to sell over packed items.
Secondly, If consumers take more resposibilities to check over packed items then it spread awareness among the societies and more and more people can get to know about how to identify right product. So, if we want to educate consumers then it is the best way as they are directly responsible to identify mistakes. For instance, if someone discover any mistake in over packed item then he can share this fact with others and people then avoid such products and can know how to identify mistake. So, if consumer have prectical knowledge then they can avoid such mistakes.
In conslusion, consumers have total resposibility to check and identify mistakes from over packed products and educate others to stop using such products in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
... relevant department for strict actions.If consumer is taking resposibilty then me...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... relevant department for strict actions.If consumer is taking resposibilty then me...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'discovers'.
Suggestion: discovers
...tify mistakes. For instance, if someone discover any mistake in over packed item then he...
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Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s and can know how to identify mistake. So, if consumer have prectical knowledge then ...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...cate others to stop using such products in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97378277154 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.709152154 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520599250936 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.71428571429 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1204362915 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246978502805 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994767486568 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384568601474 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165536612286 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00852595113576 0.0609392437508 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.7865168539 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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