Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Internet and smart media are becoming more and more common, in modern life. Many people think that newspapers are not useful and convenient enough for them. I disagree with that opinion and believe that newspapers are still important role in our life.
On the one hand, we could not negate the large impact of online media and smart device with each people. When news on global issues are covered by any computer and mobile device that have an Internet connection, people easily think that purchasing a printed copy of the common news is unnecessary and costly. Furthermore, daily updating news by newspapers is instead by opening one website on the Internet that we just need to double click. For this reason, it is understandable why newspapers become no longer needed.
However, these day, when people become more and more dependent on the digital technology, many rumours are posted on the online newspaper and make us not believe in the formal information sources. Newspapers not only are vice-government to announce to citizens but also became reading culture of older people. Besides that, storing the ancient newspapers in the library become abundant data sources for education. A concrete example is one of the oldest newspaper in Vietnam, Nhan Dan News. Nhan Dan was established in 1951. For 60 years, Nhan Dan has had important position in each Vietnamese people.
In conclusion, I believe from the pointes above that the news in the printed form, may be replaced by Internet. Though, it still has many spiritual values for each people, who need them if they have a limited Internet access.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...pers become no longer needed. However, these day, when people become more and more depen...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if they have a limited Internet access.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01872659176 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60003334186 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.384769539078 780% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2092582672 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146885821958 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502453699854 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423901387336 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918825320622 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409078541732 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.