Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over
ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas
warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of
the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over
it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining.
Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea
ice to we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the
deer's being unable to follow their ageold
migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument
and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The reports from the hunters about the declining deer population coinciding with the global warming trends, would not necessarily mean that the global warming is the cause of the population decline of deers. Many clear and direct evidences would be required to strengthen this argument.
To conclude that the melting of ice in the arctic regions, is responsible for the reduction in deer population of the Arctic region by preventing the deers to travel from island to island in search of food would require many substantial evidences. Firstly, it is only mentioned that the hunters have observed a decline in deer population. But no direct cause of the decline in the population of deers is mentioned. It might so happen that the number of hunters in the region has increased causing a decline in population. Also, maybe some malady has struck and many deers have died owing to a disease. Maybe , not enough grass is available as food for the deers and they are dying of starvation. More evidence is required, such as stating exactly how the population is declining. More evidences and data backed up by scientific observations and conclusions, is needed to validate the argument that global warming is causing a decline in the population of the deer in the Arctic regions.
Furthermore, it is mentioned that the weather is cold enough for atleast some part of the year to allow the deers to travel across the frozen islands. So, the argument needs to provide direct evidences pointing out that , at the particular time of migration, the weather hasn’t been cold enough to cause continous ice formations, thus depriving deers of their tendencies to travel from island to island on frozen ice.
On the other hand, global warming is causing an increase in global temperatures which is also causing the melting of the ice at the Arctic region. So, this in general will certainly hamper the age old migration patterns of the Arctic deer. This can limit their abilities to search for food and may cause deaths due to dearth of food and also by accidents due to non-continous icelands, hence, a decline in population. But this argument needs to be supported by direct evidences stating that the ice at the Arctics is melting which is preventing the migration habbits of the deers.
So, the argument seems to be lacking a good base of supportive evident and facts. More dependable and direct information and research could have validated the argument.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 55.5748502994 115% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 412.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95873786408 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71500270759 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434466019417 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8518740297 57.8364921388 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.70786347227 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245990474763 0.218282227539 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749225109602 0.0743258471296 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844903302341 0.0701772020484 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123371435453 0.128457276422 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960816736195 0.0628817314937 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.3799401198 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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