Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge apply for admittance?
Discuss this issue, and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Art museums undoubtedly holds an inevitable and significant importance in the lives of people and the society. Art museums has well-known visual arts mainly the paintings, sculptures, decorative arts, furniture, books and photographs which displays the rich history of our tradition and culture. However, the issue is not entirely straight forward, although some arguments can also be made against the idea. In this essay the debate will be discussed, and given a concluding view
On the one hand, those who support the idea that charges should be levied on art museums state that art museums have lost their sheen and charm and very few people know about it significant contribution to the Economy especially the young generation.
Secondly, Many supporters argue that there should be a minimum charge of $1 which can facilitate funds to these art museums to preserve the art galleries.
Thirdly, With very less number of resources it has become a daunting task for museums to maintain and preserve mainly the visual arts and sculptures while it can be referenced in future for next generation.
Conversely, some people may argue that art museums are the most informative and well processed form of information which can be interpreted people since the visual image resonates well with human being.
Secondly, the art museums not only encompass information on the how the tradition and culture was but can also give a sense of the era the people were living in while giving visitors mainly the tourist visitor a rough idea on the events happened in the past
Overall, it seems reasonable to charge a small amount of money from public to visit these places while it can help museums to restore these visual arts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07067137809 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63294752908 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4199389098 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.375 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.375 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234658503357 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107606431544 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581456046936 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1200334431 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502230874505 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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